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I TO DA GEEZY
Muthafuckin' Don!
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Humankind will thrive on compassion
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June 05, 2004, 01:17:43 AM »
As we die, our spirits move onto new ground\
while we simply burried in it, as products of body-counts\
sounds of war, situation is hard to the core, but what for, those who remain alive can't cope any more\
little children, are left with no Parents to feed'em, to raise'em, love'm or just to be with'em\
nuclear weaponry, hate we breed, many nations sit on\
eyes- used to bloody headlines, so people just read on\
millitant groups- there's no lower ground to which they can stupe\
this is pure hate, todlers burried, ain' no political fued\
no reproduction forseen, lives that were spared are too few\
we have no clue on how to handle this,u've seen the buses they blew up\
we never knew- how this shit would end up, so did u\
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We are all human beings isn't that a good enough reason for peace?
bez
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June 05, 2004, 08:24:46 PM »
I felt that man, when I first loaded it I saw the big "sounds of war" line and thought urgh thats gunna throw off the flow but it didn't, really nice man. Well written piece.
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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc
Muthafuckin' Don!
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"u gotta give respect to get respect"
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June 06, 2004, 02:38:15 AM »
i feel it, man, i think you made this piece very smart..... above all the last line, it touched every1 who read it, cuz its like da last line refer to all who read it, you know what i mean like, so it makez em think about what you wrote!
"we have no clue on how to handle this,u've seen the buses they blew up\
we never knew- how this shit would end up, so did u???\"<- what i mean
just can tell you its dope and the first 3 linez r flowin dope!
keep it up dowg!
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"I grew up on the chill-side, the no-big-deal-side, staying alive was no problem"
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