dont stop rappin'

[Dynamic]

Perfectly aimed bullets from a Tec's Extrusion
make ur body flop round like u been through Electracution
Send shots to ya non vitals Nigga, Sloooow Exacution
stab you in the arms an legs while ur Chest is Oozin
Sevear bleedin makin u suffer several Neck Contusions
Call 911 for u cause the hospital is ur Best Solution
but the Docs still gunna tell ur Moms "Expect to Lose him"
Bitch when u fuckin wit me theres no Restitution
New years Night u best change ur ways an formulate a Resolution
West Coast Nicca, Check the movement


I can drop a Punchline like eminem in a Lunchline
Represent Legit street shit simular to a PUN rhyme
Oh, My flows on overflow like a Mudslight
Murderous,The Biggest thing around an i aint talkin bout my Gun's size
my rhymes in your face from a Thugs mind
u try readin my rhymes an get ya self Tongue tied
so fuck the empty hope that ur Drugs Buy
Im killin you an ur WHOLE Bloodline
Plus Im STILL on the block makin Slugs Fly
an provin Pac's Point that even Thug's cry
only problem is Gun smoke's makin my Lungs Die
Bitch, Dont be jelious cause im amung the finest lyrical Alumni
jus lemme kno, Ill turn u into a mother fuckin freakshow. with ur weak flow.
Hall Back or fall back, fold that or hold back Im ready to bust another mother fuckin cold rap.

[bez]

I liked it.

I didnt like the way each line ended with a rhyming word though.  Try switching it all up a bit.

[Mr. O]

I like the concept.  good use of vocabularies.