It's June 16, 2024, 10:28:47 AM
This is the latest version of my song, "Ice-Cold Whalley Kid". Before, I recorded this on my computer with no adlibs or doubling, and no emotion, for that matter. Now, I have all 3. This is much, much closer to the final mixdown of the track, but most likely not the final cut. Props to anyone who drops feedback, it is highly appreciated. If you like it, pass it around!www.soundclick.com/shawnnutthttp://rapidshare.de/files/29937778/Shawn_Nutt_-_Ice-Cold_Whalley_Kid__Uncensored_.mp3.html- Shawn Nutt; Surrey, British Columbia
It's not bad man...Thought it would be worse. The only problem I have with it is it sounds too commercially influenced, at least if you wanna make music online make sure it's got more originality to it so that people will wanna check for you... This sounds like an amature made version of a radio song...The flow's there, sure it needs improvement, but it's there...Lyrics, I can't really judge that, it's your feelings on the track (hopefully)... not shit that I can really relate to or feel, but I've read your keystyles, they're not bad and if you keep at it you'll only keep improving...The work will pay off, just don't give up like I did, cuz then you'll never go back, you'll always want to, but you never will. Believe in yourself and practice, you can be an ill rapper...PeACe
LOL, you need to put some more emotion in your voice