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Ignyte
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Freestyle
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March 30, 2003, 10:17:57 PM »
i make your spine ricochet, off my fist at any time of the day/
so dont dare come my way, unless your willing to pay/
or your gonna learn how to play, a different type of game, where you pray/
so "say what you say" but when i meet you, ill be "in da club" signed up with dre/
bet you ass that i am bigger, and you can start to reconsider/
that my beef with you is bitter, coz i shit on you cats that yal run for yal kitty litter/
but that is how i am always on the grind, i stroll through the clubs with pussy on my mind/
i get all yal yungins coming up to me asking for a rhyme, but like i say to everyone i aint got the time/
i showed this girl my dick it almost made her blind, but nobody told me a big dick was a crime/
im like everybody i work 5 til 9, but after work im dressed to impress coz i got punani to find/
first spit that ive put on this board
not that good, feedback please
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Coz you see at the age of birth, we was contaminated with the caucasions curse/
I dont know what came first, the pententiary or the purse/
But I aint into that crap, I'd rather lay back and start working on my raps/
While you niggas stay strapped, with a hoe on your lap, with a dirty puss and crack/
While I stay intact with my people, and carry the mic which is lethal/
'Illicit'
Muthafuckin' Don!
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Re:Freestyle
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March 31, 2003, 01:47:55 AM »
not too bad actually, lil simplistic, a bit hard to overlook, lackin structure, but some cool lines in it.
keep postin tho, homie.
peace
Illicit
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T.J.
Wanksta
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 2072
Karma: -18
my deck
Re:Freestyle
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March 31, 2003, 03:40:35 AM »
not bad. like illicit said it lacked structure, but it was fairly good. keep writin up.
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Disceptive AssAssin
Muthafuckin' OG
Posts: 326
Karma: -8
Trip BaLLS
Re:Freestyle
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March 31, 2003, 06:04:14 AM »
2mics...
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Tex
Muthafuckin' Don!
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is this mic on?
Re:Freestyle
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March 31, 2003, 05:42:48 PM »
decent.. even though you kinda got this..
**weak line**
**punch line**
**weak line**
**punch line**
overall not bad.
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