Have I lost my mind

[Dreamz]

I have been through heaven and hell, suffered with pain//
I cut myself, bleeding blood, my mind drives me insane//
Nine time I cut to see what happen, cut so deep I get numb//
People ask me tons of question I answer to them none//
I sit in pools of blood thinkin have I lost my mind//
Wishin for the creator to take me, prayin for it to be my time//
You told me that you will take something that only one preson can take//
but i'm sorry it's gone, I'm being truthfull not fake//
I sit here and type thoughts, words and rhymes//
I cut to bleed and numb the pain, have I lost my mind//

I can see it in the stars
I can see it in the stars
You can read it in my bars
I can see it in the stars

I was wasting your time but still you care'd//
Were you a dream or were you real I don't even dare//
I caus'd you pains to point that I bleed my tears//
But thoughts of you brought me up kill'd my fears//
I can hear your voice but realize I'm alone//
I stare to the stars with my feeling cement'd in stone//
You know where my heart is, all with you nuttin left behind//
I can feel it in the air, the facts I say are you, but I've lost my mind//

[hope glimmers]

yeah she does........ call me and we'll talk or something

[UKnowWhatItIs: welcome to my traps....game over]

not bad...

[Dreamz]

the 4 line hook was inspired by
"Feel it in the air" by beanie sigel
that song hot i'm gonna rewrite this sumtime to go the beat

[bez]

Not bad not bad.

[Dreamz]

 i'll have the final key like friday so check back and let me know

[hope glimmers]

whatever happened to the final key?

[DiSSENT]

[size=08pt]Not bad at all. I felt a lot of emotion in this 1 & though the rhyming wasn't too complex/complicated, the realness made up for it in my eyez. Keep expressin' yourself, dawg. I can relate; 8.3/10 - Peace*[/size]

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

felt it!