Gareefa

i get praised and my teachers continue to be amazed
they thought that the standards couldnt be raised till they found me
they were in a daze but what do i get for my excellence?
jack shit! nothin at all its like what i do is jus graffiti on the wall
noone gives a shit about the effort and my work ethic
its pathetic, then i gots the fuckin dumb fucks who try it on with me
cause im labeled a geek, nerd, what the fuck is wrong with me?
you've pushed me over the edge, theres only so much i can take
till i hit my saturation point and the frustration i go thru tryin not ta disappoint
say whats on my mind and state it bluntly, fuck the euphemisms
its liked im trapped inside a prision cell, ready to get fucked up like Ian Huntley
im as raged as a caged animal in engaged to this rap shit but how?
one day ima pull a fuckin gun on them bitches who mock me
and still my own thoughts continue to devistate and shock me
tell them to lock my up and throw away the key
cause im too fast, too sick, too fucked up for anyone to see

Kronic

a kid,standing in front of the class babbling~//
never made no pals cus popz kept his ass traveling~//
only thing he was good at was the javelin~//
i tryed to stop other kids jacking him~//
but i was too late~//
he was the victim of some kru hate~//
i guess it was just cruel fate~//
that one day he'd cocking  the mac~//
at the kids that had been stomping his back~//
probably thinkin of when they dropped him with bats~//
or all of  the lunchtime robberies~//
bullets hitting bullies at twice-the-velocity~//
now he put in a cell~//
DOSENT MATTER THEY PUT HIM THRU HELL~//

Gareefa's waz dopeness.......

Kronic's waz aiight......more of an audio type of rhyme......

Gareefa's was cool...kronic was alright

yeah,im writin my spits at the moment with audio in mind cus i still want to get some of my shit up on here

You dont need to write real short bars for audio...
Just write a couple of multies, make shit flow

  -{bLaDe}

Gareefa's was better, dope shit, Mack's was nice too but I think it'd be doper on audio