(sorry there may be sum spelling errors but who givs a fuck)




IM A RYHME ADDICT/BUT EVERY TIME YALL RHYME/IT DEFINES TRAGIC/TRAGIC LIKE TRAFFIC ACCEDENTS,YALL SPITTIN WHACK SHIT LIKE NASTY FLATUENCE/ITS UNDAGROUND TAKTICCS/INFESTIN THE PLANETS INHABITENTS/CREATEIN ADDICTS WIT BAD HABITS /LIKE SAVAGES/RAVAGEIN AMONG THE POPULATION/CAUSIN CONFLITIONS WITHIN THE NATION/IM NEVER PAUSEIN IN SITUATIONS/CUZ I GOTS NO PAYTSHENCE(error)/NO HESITATIONS/I HATE WAITIN AND CONTEMPLATEIN/ON WHOS FAKE/AND WHOS HATIN/IM DEMOSTRATEIN/THE WAY I SPIT FLAMES/AIMED AT YALL GAY TIL YALL DECAY/EITHER WAY TODAY OR TOMMOROW/THE AK I WILL BORROW/LET IT SPRAY LEAVE YO FAM---ILY IN SORROW/BUT CANT WE /JUS GET ALONG/MAN/HIT DA BONG/AN SIP SUM TALL CANS/ID RATHER DO DAT THEN LAY YER CREW FLAT/FROM DA AUTOMACK/AND UNLOAD AH CLIP IN YO BACK/TAKE IT HOW U WANT/U WANNA HIT DA BLUNT/OR GET LIT FROM DA PUMP/I DONT STUNT PUNK/I NEVER FRONT/

Not bad.. I liked thr rhyme scheme and the flow wasnt too bad.. Try not 2 type up your shit in caps.. does get a bit annoyin..