normal rules.....

crew votes?

yeah....you'll need um

i don't know, mack's slow but here's 20 lines

20 Line Murder

Koncept run this, mack, ya didn't know? I guess I have to plant the seed so knowledge can grow//
with an immaculate flow, I make impossible logic make sense so I load your nose with blows//
get this "Koncept"? na, I didn't tihnk so, I'ma little too advanced for bitches of your level//
I went down to the crossroads and met the devil, he gave me a mic and told me to raise the treble//
so now I raise hell in your mental, you can't shake me, always in your rhymes, always in your mind//{5}
right behind your eyes, you can't shake me, you must realize your hate inside is fear of me//

I don't know what mack's been drinking, that got him tripping, thinking he's pac//
he's talking some talk, but does he walk the walk, or get dropped by the boss//
me beating mack is really a team loss, now DA looks like bitches, but I guess that's the cost//
if your feeling too big, you get your nuts cut off, and handed right back in jar your crew can show off//{10}

mack, look at yourself now, calling me out like we got argument to settle, this beef is one sided//
let me rewind it to when I first ignited, I drew attention, I made vets excited, I proved who I am//
so why do I have to prove myself to haters like you, you bit once, your career should be through//
bitch, I thought you were leaving, your not wanted, only your crew is believing your hot, kid//  
trust this, I'ma bust this, typhoons couldn't rust this, you and your weak crew can't duck this//{15}

Everyone see that, I ripped him up, mack thought he could fuck, but he can't even touch Koncept//
he pressed his luck, he's the one that got fucked up, at least he can buck up cuz he lost to Koncept//
I'm mack's role model, he looks up to me, only his love comes out as jealousy and envy//
he hates, but I know some of you reading this can relate, go ahead and retaliate, CLOUD 9 and DA//
you gudda face it some day, Koncept just committed grammatical rape// (oh damn!){20}

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and hurry up mack, slow mother fucker

lol

whatever dude, you know you can't compeat so you need more time to write

^^^funny response fa some one who dunt want beef

anyhows back to wats his face.......

i need-mo-time-to-write,what the fuck you lookin fa a line-ta-bite
postin up my verse on another board like this rhyme-is-tight
ya koncept aiight,but ya design-aint-right,unlike kill mack dont need a "nine"-ta-fight
frontin like mine-aint-nice,two days,verse-aint-up,and you actin-the-bitch
but really puttin you in a hearse-aint-tough,you jus lucky im jus rappin-this-shit
see im-clappin-this-kid,as hard as trappin-my-wit,u was recruited to fill a gap-in-ya-clique
but you could fill-dem-shoes,i sat back,felt sorry told everyone ta kill-dem-boo's
call in the whole elite you still-gun-lose,you hangin yaself,i will-give-u-the-noose
DA bitch,you-aint-heard,we taint-ya-verbs ya need ta concentrate-you-herbs
straight ghetto we-hate-da-burbs,imma get my sis ta spit maybe youll relate-ta-hers
i still despise-rooks,we dun seen thru ya lies-look,you aint no mex-i-can
i got these guys-shook,get ya lifes-took,can mack bet koncept?yes-he-can!

dun....ova...kaput

werd..... vote = mack, multies jus off the hook man....untouchable, def. Nice verse from Koncept, but I think that macks was jus that league up

nah keep it 1-0 sorry but i dont particulary agree wit people wit a handful of posts votin...i want a fair match...1-0