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<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« on: May 23, 2003, 07:46:17 PM »
ok, rules just in case u missed em
15 bars max
first to 4 votes
3-0 votes=ko
open votes
explain votes
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2003, 09:11:43 PM »
i'll drop my verse in round an hour.
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #2 on: May 24, 2003, 04:23:57 AM »
lyrically ab-struse, writin whack-bars, ur flava's shit like crab-juice/
it's child ab-use the way i inflict fat-scars on this kid like a mad-moose/
tightening this cats-noose, by letting my abusive gab-loose/
u spit so much nonsensical bullshit, they labelled you "abstruse"/

study-mah-name for lines-to-use in ya weak verse, buddy-ya-lame/1
i'm stunning-tha-game, ya minds-abused, so u busy shunning-tha-shame/
i stand out like a fubu shirt-on-nike-stands, havent u heard-ur-quite-bland/2
i couldnt feel ur shit if u layed a turd-in-my-hand/

i didnt try to warn-thee, u know what u askin for when u say "i'm down"/
ya shit's too "corny", more proof that u cant "break it down"/3
fuck a 9 to slay-ya, my actions do the talkin, leavin this dumb-gay-nervous/
fuck RhymeSayers, i'll call up your mum for a 1 day service ;)/4


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1- he seemed to do a lot of research on his battle vs mack, clearly he will do the same for me.
2- nike stand meaning nike clothing stand.
3- corn doesnt break down in ya body.... whenever u eat it, u can see it in ya shit.
4- in his avatar pic its Slug from the RhymeSayers, it says "1-Day Servce" on the pic.
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #3 on: May 24, 2003, 11:07:10 AM »
No beef as always, check it.

I'm sadistic, grab ya dick-n-twist-it, and rename this man a misfit // (1)
the answer is non-existent, when the question is who wins-this //
like cafeteria lunchtime-ya-show-gets-no-market and is within-suspension //
ya punchline-n-flow-is-off-target like pissin with-an-erection //
every bar is cynical i leave these newbies-feeling-haunted //
this battle is a failed attempt like groupies-being-wanted // (2)
long bars, and tremendous wordplay, as stiff as my genetalia //
battling you is a joke, like hearing dope emcee's from australia // (3)
i shoot flows like seamen, savor the taste aint it sticky-girl? //
my foots in store for these men, whos fav website is dick-ies-world // (4)
research isn't needed when its proven this cat is beaten //
service is for a day, but to beat you its an hour of my week-end // (5)
on the lyrical status you sean hunter and i'm mr.feeny //
cuz even with ya double vision sig you still couldn't see me // (6)

(1) Misfit - Something of the wrong size or shape for its purpose
(2) Check his personal text
(3) He's from Australia
(4) His website is "dickys world"
(5) 1 day service, my sig that is
(6) The lady in his sig
« Last Edit: May 24, 2003, 11:08:36 AM by abstruse »
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #4 on: May 24, 2003, 01:29:09 PM »
VOTE!!!!! plz ;)
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #5 on: May 24, 2003, 03:04:43 PM »
I'm not gonna vote cause me and answer are in the same crew, but abstruse, tight verse man.  Answer seemed to focus too much on the multis and not enough on makin' the punches harder.  Abstruse has a very "mack-like" flow and his verse was tight.
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #6 on: May 24, 2003, 03:22:12 PM »
Quote from: the an$wer on May 23, 2003, 07:46:17 PM
ok, rules just in case u missed em
15 bars max
first to 4 votes
3-0 votes=ko
open votes
explain votes
You can vote bro, I accepted his rules.
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #7 on: May 24, 2003, 04:00:41 PM »
Or is it a rule that you cant vote if one is on the same crew as you? Dont know fill me in with these battle rules. I thought open vote was for anyone, and no dickryding was owen/crew votes.
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #8 on: May 24, 2003, 05:11:21 PM »
 :-\

abstruse, its up 2 u if u are gonna allow crew votes, coz i'm the one with the crew n u arent.....
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #9 on: May 24, 2003, 06:06:25 PM »
I dont care if anyone in your crew votes. Although by your last post on the keystyle forum aren't you not in a crew anymore? ;) UPPIN FOR VOTES!
« Last Edit: May 24, 2003, 06:07:29 PM by abstruse »
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #10 on: May 24, 2003, 11:49:12 PM »
im sorta still in the crew, but if NoT isnt active and sees the threead, i'll probly drop out.
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #11 on: May 25, 2003, 07:56:42 AM »
Answer, your verse was nice, sum multis weren't immaculate and the first part was worse than the rest (you finally rhymed "abstruse" with "abstruse")...the punches weren't bad, I know you can't have a lot of shit on him. Sum nice metas there, but the flow was a bit off at points

Abstruse, you didn't only have perfect multis either, but they were goôd, same for metas and punches which were slightly better than the answer's. Flow was ok, but i'ma give this for you cause of slightly stronger punchin

VOTE = ABSTRUSE
« Last Edit: May 25, 2003, 07:57:03 AM by Kill »
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #12 on: May 25, 2003, 11:44:27 AM »
okay..

answer's punches most of 'em were weak .. i thought the first two bars were bad openers.. wasnt quite feelin the flow ..good metas though..

abstruse .. again punches werent of great quality either but was a tad bit bitter than answer's ... multis could ave been better.. i did think that the vocab on display here was also better than answer's ..

so overall my vote goes to ABSTRUSE
 
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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #13 on: May 25, 2003, 02:18:36 PM »
Yeah, gotta go with abstruse on this one as well, for the reasons I originally stated.  You guys can choose to count or not count this vote, but that's my opinion.

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Re:<the an$wer ::VS:: abstruse>
« Reply #14 on: May 25, 2003, 04:36:02 PM »
ehhhh....... i hate battling noobs with shit all i can write about

3-0 KO. nice work dude.
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