rules:
10-15 bars
blind verses
deadline this saturday


If you got problems with the rules... change them


edit: i changed the deadline from thursday to saturday cause i dont have no time today or tomorrow to write anything. Friday is my day off so ima just have to drop on saturday. Ill try and drop tomorrow but can't make no promises. And yo, check in... i aint wasting a verse.

koo

a quik drop............
chekin in

Im about to put ya punk ass in a submission~ while spitting bars that’ll leave ya pussy ass in Critical Condition/
Your hole Rhyme scheme is missing~ so who you think you dissing~ better be careful fo yo ass Come up missing/
Your easy to break down kinda like chemical Digestion~ wont stop until your bodies restin/
Without a question~ ill break ya head in~ and have blood dripping off the bottom of ya chin/
This cat don’t have a clue~ about rhyming so im gonna hit em easy like the common flue/
He thinks he tuff shit cause he joined a crew~ nigga ill eat you like stew~ and put you in my mouth and chew/
Than let my stomach break you down~ watch you get eating up by acids then drown/
You fucking clown~ you aint no longer gonna be around~ cause im wearing the crown/
Next youll flow down my Intestine~ where youll stop and be restin~ and then the Other shit rushed in/
While you telling god to forgive you for your sin~ im up there drinking Tonic gin/
You starting to Turn all affectional~ while yo ass bout to drop out my anal/
While you heading towards the bowl which is very navigational/
I look back and whipe my ass and flush ya down the pipes~ followed by baby whipes/
Theres all different types~ of germs you’ll meat ones with polka dots and ones with stripes/
Then youll empty into the cesspool~ where the toxins will make you drool~ and kill you in less then 5 minutes you fucking fool/
You want 10-15 barz that’s enough time for me to Kill your entire Squad~ that’s wat u get when you Fuckin With A god/
Hitting you harder then a tree getting hit by a lighting rod~ and slice ya down the middle like a farmer splittin a pod

vote Fabulous nice rap man

vote = ill natural.

verse was dope.... used metas and multis while fab did neither.......... fab had decent flow but as i learned the hard way here in battles flow dont mean shit when texting... all bout technique

DAMN I think dat ill had dis 1 cuzz... listen he had mo complexity in shit, made me laugh like'a fat bitch cuss...good ass flows...good ass flows...

VOTE:ILL NATURAL

yo i aint finna vote...cus yall been on some shit bout vdk always vote fa each other..but ill ya got this...yo when ya verse fa the collab gunna be ready?

vote = ill natural.

verse was dope.... used metas and multis while fab did neither.......... fab had decent flow but as i learned the hard way here in battles flow dont mean shit when texting... all bout technique

i kinda agree with this guy here but i still think it would ahave been even better if ill's shit had a better flow to it i think near the end up to right before the last 2 lines he was fading the shit outta Fab

Fab don't get me wrong ur shit was tight and might have be good enough if the was a mic battle but it just was to simple worded for a text battle

my vote = ill-natural