you're def.  Improving.  Very fast too I might add.  You got nice melodies, and good ideas for the beats.  Unfortunatley, it's all fruityloops sounds.  And that makes it sound "cheap".  But keep at it, get more sounds, and maybe I'll steal some shit off ya.  lol.

tyte, i was feelin "meh" more.

Dood.....wat tha fuck is U on over there^ Ain't no reason 2 put tha man down, U act like U real professional wit it now, hate 2 break it 2 ya, but yur sounds still sound fruity too man.....

Anywayz, mannn, I'm defenitly feelin that 2nd one TJ, nice job on dat.....Keep at it cuzzin.....

Also, start learnin about a song's structure.....like do 16 bar verses, then 4 or 8 choruses etc.....U will have it comeleted then......and like Suga said, try 2 get new sounds, in a studio, these fruity sounds just don't HIT like they are suppose 2.....and if U dun have someone 2 engineer tha beat for U and make it hit then these artists will not even accept what U have 2 offer no matter how dope it is.....feel me? good shit over all tho.....hit us back wit new shit.....

Wats wit tha parenthesis on mayne and cuzzin? wat part of cali u from again?

Don't mind him Teejay, he just gets mad when someone else gets some attention, notice him mentioning all this shit about studio and how he's sellin beats...lol, do what U do cuzzin...eventually U will figure out how 2 expand in this shit...looks 2 me U got some skills 2 begin wit no doubt...

firstly.... thx to peeps for the helpful feedback.
next... sccit, i dissed u in one or maybe two threads, and all of a sudden im dissing you non-stop behind ur back? wtf? point out more than 2 recent threads where i've dissed you behind your back and you will have proven your point... until then, keep your mouth shut coz its clear u have no idea what goes on around you.
and you didnt answer my question in the thread you made about the best poster.... didnt u say u were "too old for internet fun"?? threads like that arent really music-related, which is what you told me you go on the net for...