Author Topic: Heavyweight Tounrey Round 1: Illicit vs M-Dogg (Read 398 times)

Reef · « **on:** October 20, 2003, 04:32:13 PM »

10 barz Maximum..

Verses Due by Monday 27th. Gives you just under a week. Im not going to be hot on time limits but if your shit aint there when i check Monday night (GMT) or Tuesday morning then you will eb DQ'ed.

The winner will face Craig Roll or SkillZ

'Illicit' · « **Reply #1 on:** October 27, 2003, 08:32:55 AM »

checkin in...

'Illicit' · « **Reply #2 on:** October 27, 2003, 08:57:07 AM »

aint no way you stand a chance in a ten bar max/
dude thinks he run elite but his friends call acts/
his whole crew really knows that M Dogg's wack/
there's rules to rhyme but you fail to comprehend all FAQ's/(facts)
no need for diggin' deep 'n try my hardest ta kill/
I don't even sense a challenge if you don't harvest some skill/
I'm lyrically full forced watch me scarrin' ya grill/
nex' time to ya battle me best smart up or chill/
you could roll wit' the french but not beat my peninsulian army/
cuz this a lost bout so call Elite to scoop up your body/

simple quick ones. fuck it

waitin on you homie, remember jus a battle, no hard feelins.

M Dogg™ · « **Reply #3 on:** October 27, 2003, 08:17:40 PM »

I actually started writing one until I found out about the fire in San Bernardino, and then my attention went straight to home, but I'll put up a quicky.

We can agree on onething Illicit feel off, it ain't a CeeRide no more 'cause his lyrically soft/
His skillz loft now we in a new era, Melanin ain't around so no one can protect you sheriff/
You feel embarrous homie?, you crew exposed you to the threat of real terriost/
You skillz are lacking you can't compete, like my spelling skillz you a grade level too weak/
But that's ok 'cause I can still dish out defeat, like a ninja in the night with my ID not leaked/
You try to come fast like cleats but trip, I'm the Real Slim Shady 'cause I do more than pistol whip/
Give you 10 championship round of a .38 clip, But I ain't a Gangsta like D.J. Quik/
I'm just a man that spits to leave you like Sleepy Hollow, well you only worry about kids you swallow/

Kill · « **Reply #4 on:** October 28, 2003, 01:32:52 AM »

Quote from: M Dogg on October 27, 2003, 08:17:40 PM

embarrous.....terriost.....like my spelling skillz you a grade level too weak/

lol

M Dogg's was a bit better IMO but Illicit was further from what he can actually do...but far as I know this ain't to be voted on

Reef · « **Reply #5 on:** November 02, 2003, 10:09:14 AM »

Wow this is pretty hard... In my opinion you both came with very similar styles.

Illicit: heh.. Reminded me of a 50Cent-type rhyme, punches were pretty much on point and the flow was damn near untouchable. The vocab was a bit limited but i think that was the point and it matched the style of the rhyme genrally.

M-Dogg: Like i said.. Similar style to Illicit.. But i think its pretty much a typical verse from you man. Flowed well (i wouldnt say as well as illicit's) but yours had sum similies thrown in, and some nice disses along the way.

I see this as a close battle.. but my vote has to go to M-Dogg here. Nice battle people!!