Newbies please..don’t come on WCC..with deez high and mighty
please critiques..Dope thread peep!
Hang back a bit…don’t bang for crit…witchya new found slang and shit
Like ya bang wit crips
And when a vet like Illicit…da Notrorius one or M Dogg (aka big pun) reads one
and critiques em.. be discreet son…it ain’t bleak son…ya still weak son
Raise ya skills some…

Read some past threads from Skillz and em, Kill and ‘em, they were killin’ em,
An’ I ain’t  poppin’ shit, just givin’ hints for kids benefits, but don’t get it twisted,
get all pissed an shit, start screamin’ who’s this Vito kid tellin’ me how ta live,
I’m just positive all ya critiques ain’t gonna be positive, that’s how it is,

Shit..I ain’t a vet yet…just got a strong set and do give compliments…yet
I still got sentiments to give ya sediment as speech impediments(bury ya)
So come at me with ya little heat...I said I ain’t a vet but I’ll still put ya ass to sleep!

nice ass

vito, the verse was coo, but i doubt those certain newbies that made u write it will change...we've told em a couple times

Well I'ma newbie/in this g-thang/stinging the offence/like a bloody fang/but i ain't from England/brotha/my mind is broken in two places/like Barbie&Ken/and aftermath/isn't pretty/thats why I'm not pretty/but gritty/I'm fat/I got man titties/but ya'll dont here a brotha/washing/like leaves in a gutta/so dirty/there is no nother!

How's dat folks?!

haha no need to read past post i'm bout to jump in some new battles  

That ain't cool and I ain't even a newbie/
But when it comes to keystylin I am new see/
and if im battling Im just stayin alive like that fugee/
its my duty/...to represent my rhymes to the fullest/
i spit my words like bullets/
so you best stay away/
this is real it ain't no childs play/
I ain't chucky, and if you lucky, you'll see another day/
so dont mess with Storm unless you wanna see my AK.

hey, I thought you were pretty good..shit ya beat me