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A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« on: July 02, 2003, 04:14:10 AM »
Yo.. Ive recorded a new track.. its on the magic stick beat and its called MAGIC SHIT.. lol me and my mates had fun doin this.. we were all in fits of laughter pissin about n shit.. bu here it is..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/gareefamusic.htm

Would love some feedback, strong areas, areas of improvement..
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2003, 11:02:27 AM »
i liked everything about this, lyrics, flow, everything was hott!! this is ur dopest drop yet, i dont think there is anythin wrong wid this...

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2003, 03:08:42 PM »
this is hella dope man..fav song that you've recorded so far..keep spittin that real shit!! 8)
I ain't little but vicious, guns no misses You feel me, kisses or wishes, fore I break you up like dishes Fuck your bosses, my forces, endorses To kill all your sources y'all niggas best be cautious No losses, my fortress, is Jaguars and Porsche's Ride the OTB to check my money on the horses My horrors is flawless, my block one of the broadest Off the main attraction for them whitey ass tourists That I tosses, it scorches, with out no remorses Leave they bloody body to be found in Mount Morris
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2003, 08:05:57 PM »
Props...The song sound tight.
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2003, 12:04:29 PM »
that was pretty dope...homeboy keep it up...
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2003, 04:12:43 AM »
bump.. more feed plz..
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2003, 03:30:26 PM »
Its not bad mate, flow is quite cool and the chorus was dope.

I got the magic shitttttt. lol

It aint bad at all mate.  Listenable deffo, I wud say that your voice maybe still needs a little work but I cant really exaplin how, its just the accent thing.

Feelin it tho man.
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #7 on: July 08, 2003, 01:22:30 AM »
Its not bad mate, flow is quite cool and the chorus was dope.

I got the magic shitttttt. lol

It aint bad at all mate.  Listenable deffo, I wud say that your voice maybe still needs a little work but I cant really exaplin how, its just the accent thing.

Feelin it tho man.

Thanx mayne.. I know my voice needs work.. I think only the Britz notice that thou cause thats wot my homies have said.. the rest of the americans n shit i shown seem to think its coo
 

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« Reply #8 on: July 10, 2003, 03:30:10 PM »
smart shit, you dont kill for money u got money in your mind, ye u pimped the beat. Keep representing that accent, you with the british accent, and me with the haitian accent  8)
« Last Edit: July 10, 2003, 03:32:25 PM by Bz_MuthaFuckin_Mak »
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #9 on: July 11, 2003, 12:19:30 AM »
Its not bad mate, flow is quite cool and the chorus was dope.

I got the magic shitttttt. lol

It aint bad at all mate.  Listenable deffo, I wud say that your voice maybe still needs a little work but I cant really exaplin how, its just the accent thing.

Feelin it tho man.

Thanx mayne.. I know my voice needs work.. I think only the Britz notice that thou cause thats wot my homies have said.. the rest of the americans n shit i shown seem to think its coo

Why put on an american accent??? Why not just rap in your native tounge???
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #10 on: July 11, 2003, 03:11:16 AM »
Its not bad mate, flow is quite cool and the chorus was dope.

I got the magic shitttttt. lol

It aint bad at all mate.  Listenable deffo, I wud say that your voice maybe still needs a little work but I cant really exaplin how, its just the accent thing.

Feelin it tho man.

Thanx mayne.. I know my voice needs work.. I think only the Britz notice that thou cause thats wot my homies have said.. the rest of the americans n shit i shown seem to think its coo

Why put on an american accent??? Why not just rap in your native tounge???

He is, he was just saying that Americans prob feel his voice a bit more cause they don't know the differetnaccents that come outter the Uk.  like scousers (people from liverpool) prob wouldent feel that voice because its a london accent (innit?) same the other way round.  I am no way saying that I didnt like the song because of where he is from, I just didnt like the voice, which is prob because I aint never heard n e body with that kind of voice rap before, apart from the blazin squad.  
 

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Re:A new song i jus recorded.. Please peep
« Reply #11 on: July 11, 2003, 04:19:05 AM »
smart shit, you dont kill for money u got money in your mind, ye u pimped the beat. Keep representing that accent, you with the british accent, and me with the haitian accent  8)

Thanx mayne.. a collabo would be tizzight.. lol