SHORT KEYSTYLE CIPHER WITH ROD... anyone got a minute to review it for us?

[TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96']

HajjIbrahim03 (2:12:32 AM): yo..
HajjIbrahim03 (2:12:37 AM): you do..
HajjIbrahim03 (2:12:55 AM): keystylin anymore over AIM.. like text battle or cipher?
RODZILLA151 (2:13:43 AM): naw not really
HajjIbrahim03 (2:14:29 AM): aiight, nevermind
RODZILLA151 (2:14:37 AM): why u trynna do it rite now?
HajjIbrahim03 (2:14:52 AM): yeah.. just for a few minutes.. it will only take like 3 minutes of your time
HajjIbrahim03 (2:15:04 AM): and then if we both agree we can post it in the keystyle section
HajjIbrahim03 (2:15:10 AM): you want to do a cipher or a battle?
RODZILLA151 (2:15:47 AM): man a battle id have 2 concentrate on, im exhausted from the day at this time
RODZILLA151 (2:15:49 AM): ill spit wuteva tho
HajjIbrahim03 (2:16:04 AM): aiight..
HajjIbrahim03 (2:16:09 AM): let's do a cipher...
HajjIbrahim03 (2:16:12 AM): here we go...
HajjIbrahim03 (2:16:15 AM): starting now...
RODZILLA151 (2:16:16 AM): aight


HajjIbrahim03 (2:17:45 AM): Yo.. it's late night what the fuck am I doing on a computer/ just typing some shit, while others are out hangin with alcohol abusers/ yo, man.. I'm slow to get started.. so I want to pass the mic to Rod and ask him to get retarded.. get straight stupid on the mic and hit me with some inspiration/ So I can drop some iller bars cause this shit be fakin/!

RODZILLA151 (2:19:51 AM): rhymin late night, tired but I stay tight/ spit some real shit, I just might/ I'm screamin fuck the law and I mean it/ souls get snatched behind walls, I done seen it/ reading the word of god, trynna real hard just to fall asleep/ cuzz swimming in the ocean ain't no good when ure in too deep/ too blessed 2 be depressed/ but the stress doesn't seem to digest/ so it's on I guess/ in a weird way I like this/ I dunno nothin else but this!

HajjIbrahim03 (2:24:28 AM): Yo.. that's ill/ it's like hip-hop is reachin out and savin us time and time again/ Cause this life is a vast ocean and it's too deep to swim/  So we just hangin on to what's comin natural/  And through the narrowed context we can drop it like a basketball/  Through the rim and score enough points to get to the big leagues/  Man, I'll be damned if this hip-hop can't save us from the worst disease/ of hatred and me against you/ cause in this context your my brother/ but step outside this hip-hop court and I'm a Knight and your a court Jester/ and I'm rebelling against the crown/ but when the beat is bumpin I'm willing to put all my weapons down!

RODZILLA151 (2:26:31 AM): all I ever wanted was success so fuck a bitch/ I dunno why they so obsessed when I treat em like shit! bitch drop the non-sense before I take you hostage/ cuzz time is present, a present is a gift, its nothin to waste/ it's late and in the morning theres money to be chased/ I can't afford to catch another case/ so I tell a bitch get up out my face before I put her in her place n erase her wit no trace! shit, I got a weakness for these non-respecting breezies/ late night and im talking to one just so she can please me/ it's a disease, I'm tellin ya! fuck the world, zilla this world is failin ya!


HajjIbrahim03 (2:30:47 AM): This world is failin us all/ Allah says in Suratal Asr that by the token of time and through the ages/ we all in a state of loss in different stages/ but the only way to get back is through belief and good deeds/ but sometimes we feel like this world ain't fullfillin our needs/ I need to live like they did in the days of the Khalifa/ strive for Allah/ and live with women, marry often 4 wives that's good livin/ travellin place to place spreadin the religion/ I envision those days, but today thangz seem stretched out and nasty we in a maze/ eatin moldy and stank cheese/ man, even my rhymes seem diseased/ I come so sick/ here's the mic what you gone do with it?

RODZILLA151 (2:36:41 AM): The mic I toast on the western side of the northern part of the west coast/ you will never stand me, zilla's never happy, different from most/ I make a left, then a right/ driving round the neighbourhood trippin out in the late night/ I see fights, I see police lights/ I see demons all around these street lights/ some of these blocks ain't nothing nice/ what's the definition of nice? it sure ain't life/ life isn't nice, life is beautiful no matter how ugly we see it/ It's unknown what comes after it, so don't decieve it/ well that's what I was taught at least/ life is what happens between our plans, but it's a fuckin beast!

HajjIbrahim03 (2:36:48 AM): okay homie.. I guess that's it for now.. thanks.. I'll go post it on keystyle if you don't mind man... peace

RODZILLA151 (2:37:11 AM): fo sho

['Illicit']

nice, seems like u two were on the same page that night. i liked the last two spits the most cuz they sounded like u warmed up. im not gonna rate the rhymes etc. cuz i dont freestyle all that well therefore i must say it was a good little cipher.

peace