New beat... My best beat in a long time!.. Check it and leave feedback!

[Oklin]

it would be great with some feedback on this.. imo its very dope.. feedback on the drums too please..

http://myspace.com/oklinbeatproduction
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4380893&q=hi

(Beat 73)

[J Bananas]

sounds dope

[Shawn Nutt]

its nice, but personally i think that one u sent me (38?) was better
i dont like the drums as much as the rest of the song... if anything, the drums bring it down more than make it better
but still, overall its a very good beat

[Oklin]

thanks for the feedback

Shawn Nutt - Well i think that i have developed my drums a lot on this beat and made them doper than on my old beats... anyways everybody got different taste..

[Shawn Nutt]

thanks for the feedback

Shawn Nutt - Well i think that i have developed my drums a lot on this beat and made them doper than on my old beats... anyways everybody got different taste..

yea i was just gonna say... we got different tastes in music... obviously u have talent, its just that i dont "enjoy" listening to it, u know? well keep at it, cuz i really like beat 38, so maybe u could pull out another one like that

[Timmeeeehh]

Tight.. The bassline is a bit boring. Drums are cool, but can have throughout the beat bit more variation in it, double snareclap, or more bassdrums sometimes.
I think you should fill it a bit more, it still sounds very empty. Maybe some backgroundsounds like people talking or something.. Just giving some thoughts.. Keep on it

[Oklin]

Tight.. The bassline is a bit boring. Drums are cool, but can have throughout the beat bit more variation in it, double snareclap, or more bassdrums sometimes.
I think you should fill it a bit more, it still sounds very empty. Maybe some backgroundsounds like people talking or something.. Just giving some thoughts.. Keep on it

aight i feel you... the bassline is just following the tones which was in the background og the piano sample, imo that went out pretty dope.. you might be right on more variation.. thta is deffently something i need to do more with my beats...

btw.. i am a part of Melanin Deficient now.. my beats is also up on our soundclick: http://www.soundclick.com/melanindeficientcrew

[bLaDe]

I'm feelin' this quite a bit, I would say that you have improved; good work on the drums, and the bassline isn't bad.  It has more originality to it than your previous work, i'm feelin the piano and sax too, it adds some flavour to it.  Chorus is alright, for some reason it seemes suited for singing on perhaps, but it's still doable with rap(chorus).  I would agree with the cat who said you might try adding more variation to it, but otherwise I like it, and i'm feelin the flow and overall tone, peace

-b[X]

[Oklin]

I'm feelin' this quite a bit, I would say that you have improved; good work on the drums, and the bassline isn't bad.  It has more originality to it than your previous work, i'm feelin the piano and sax too, it adds some flavour to it.  Chorus is alright, for some reason it seemes suited for singing on perhaps, but it's still doable with rap(chorus).  I would agree with the cat who said you might try adding more variation to it, but otherwise I like it, and i'm feelin the flow and overall tone, peace

-b[X]

thanks on the feedback

i appreciate it

[Bramsterdam (see ya)]

73 & 38  I dig alot

[Mr. O]

i thought that was dope east coast type of music...i think something is missing but other than that...good job.

[Boo-Yaa †]

i think something is missing but other than that...good job.

[Oklin]

73 & 38  I dig alot

i thought that was dope east coast type of music...i think something is missing but other than that...good job.

i think something is missing but other than that...good job.

thanks

['Illicit']

its dope the way it is, density is jus fine. u could add more drops etc later if vocals are to be put on it.  nice beat. 

[Oklin]

its dope the way it is, density is jus fine. u could add more drops etc later if vocals are to be put on it.  nice beat. 

ahh thanks...

it means a lot to me that so many are replying with positive feedback