Author Topic: 2 new tracks updated (Read 151 times)

Mr. O · « **on:** September 01, 2006, 01:05:13 PM »

"it's systematic" (rock/experiemental)

and

"Givin' it up" (rap) (loop only.)

http://www.myspace.com/jrtiktrytitid

thank u

Mr. O · « **Reply #1 on:** September 01, 2006, 05:13:01 PM »

Timmeeeehh · « **Reply #2 on:** September 02, 2006, 01:28:16 AM »

givin it up - tight drums, tight shit. can't really give any criticism. might need a bit more variation, that's it.

systematic - sounds which are used are quite ugly in my opinion; snare, organ, etc. doesn't feel very rocky at all. i would replace the snare for a hip-hop snare and make a bit freaky shit of it, no organ, just more synths.

Mr. O · « **Reply #3 on:** September 02, 2006, 01:39:46 AM »

Quote from: John "Prima" Doe on September 02, 2006, 01:28:16 AM

givin it up - tight drums, tight shit. can't really give any criticism. might need a bit more variation, that's it.

systematic - sounds which are used are quite ugly in my opinion; snare, organ, etc. doesn't feel very rocky at all. i would replace the snare for a hip-hop snare and make a bit freaky shit of it, no organ, just more synths.

thx for comment..but for systamic song..is not rap..it's experiemental...so yeah...