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[Hizzle]

sittin all alone sippin on this jack and coke
take tha spliff, lite it up and i begin to toke
but i neva choke, people thinkin ima joke
til i put em on tha flo and no it aint a hoax
i take people out and they neva come back
and nobody talks shit, cuz aint nobody strapped
the way i is, AR with 7 loaded clips
take it to ya momma and ya grandma and ya fuckin bitch
cuz i couldnt care less about ya muhfuckin feelins
hang ya children by tha ceilin, have ya sister out there dealin
her twat like pot, whatever u want i got
but im much more content on seein people get shot
cuz thats funny to me, and now im stuck in a dillema
am i the unibomber, or a college kid from virginia
but either way im bustin as the shells hit the ground
everybodies fallin but they aint makin a sound
they out................................ like the warriors in 5
and i look at the rap game and realize its mine
im placin the crown of the west on my head
underestimatin me's a good way to get filled wit lead
and i dont give a fuck son, im walkin wit my handgun
call me john cena cuz im bout that "com get some"
i'll hook ya up 24/7 anyway ya want it
and im lookin at ya girl, impressed on how she flaunt it
i -want -her, i -got- her,  im-a straight- baller,
ima get her phone number and then ima call her
make a video in ur bed in your home and im gone
and its all your bad, u shouldnt leave a ho alone
nooooooooo and thats all there is to it
cant nobody c me in rap music, i loose it
like slim in 8 mile, i'll shoot ya with a smile
and dont touch that dial, i'll be back in a while