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Lyrical-Poet

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« on: April 01, 2008, 09:07:10 AM »
From over seas to the back streets, I strap poetic heat
While you retreat, from my lyrical infection
My poetic injection, my rebirth my resurrection
The words flow in connection, to people's affection
To their soul and core, my words open them to explore
And impore,like never before or until they adore one another
Like two star crossed lover, under the covers, rolling and rocking
Walking and locking hand in each others, or embracing feelings like brothers
Poetic words flow into mothers, and out through daughters and sons
The days just begun, no one will be outdone, as long as you reach
And use words to teach, not preach. but always listen and learn
Poetic words return, smiles to faces of millions
Or billions of civilians, in the world for that one day
We are equal, or we realize our dreams
In the light that screams, so like Common
"I wrote a letter just to better my soul,
If I don't express it then forever I'll hold"
The words I was told, and watch the world unfold
For better or worst, i been blessed with this cursed
For my words to dispersed, thoughts to be learned
Retaught and return, My words embrace with grace
And bless the rest, that read or hear my words
So may they fly like brids, from back streets
To over seas, so listen to my words please




 


 






My 1st album had no famous guest appearances
The outcome I'm crowned the best lyricist. Nas- Got Urself A Gun

"I started rapping because I wanted people to hear what I have to say, I want as many people to hear me as possible, and I do everything in my power to make that pop."
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« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2008, 09:37:15 AM »
Pretty Good Kid keep it up
 

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« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2008, 04:13:19 PM »
Damn son, you is niceee.
 

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« Reply #3 on: April 09, 2008, 05:49:31 AM »
yeah man, that shit was fire.



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