Round 1: (W) Jookin vs. (L) Quiet Truth - JOOKIN DISQUALIFIED

[TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96']

8-12 bars
first to 3 votes wins (unless after one week voting is still not finished then I (as the moderator) pick winner

[QuietTruth]

The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme'

[Fuck Your Existence]

The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme'

dope homie

[.:DaYg0sTyLz:.]

ummm, I havent battled in years....and didnt sign up for this shit. But for some reason Infnite just tossed my name in the mix...lol



Its the 'second coming' like part two in a sex flick
Like ramps on freeways, we'll see you at the exit
Leavin you anorexic, yah weight is diminishin
Mortal Kombat rap, and my fate is to "FINISH HIM!"
Like im rapin the innocent, this 'little pussy is fucked'
Shoven rabbits feet, take a seat man yah 'pushin yah luck'
Perpetratin, bitch please, little fleas a big phony
Only "M.C" I can see, G, is in yah sig homie
Dont ask, dont tell, so gay guys salute
In the closet all yah life, now thats the real "Quiet Truth"

[.:DaYg0sTyLz:.]

The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme'

you just ignorin that whole 8-12 bars thing huh? lol

[Lunatic]

god damn i cant even vote both y'all KILLED IT

[QuietTruth]

The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme'

you just ignorin that whole 8-12 bars thing huh? lol

Nah, he said 8-12 bars, not 8-12 lines.

[|JEM|ILL|]

Not quite sure if I'm allowed to vote or what, but whatever he's some centz...

QT

Lots of nice and original concepts, but the delivery is off... not to mention you did call yourself a "herb", i got the word play, but ain't that still a bad thing to be...fuck it? I dunno. Any way, it's still a solid verse a few tweaks and it'd be a killer verse. Keep spittin and elevatin. I was feelin the "hertz" line just you could reworded it to impact harder im sure.

Jook

You used classic and effective style of keystyle battling, setup-punch, and you had some dope punches, good personals, overall a dope verse.


Vote = Jook

Reason = He just hit harder, the punches were a lot stronger.


Keep elevatin... Good battle

[QuietTruth]

Propz for votin'.

[Fuck Your Existence]

both very solid drops,imma go QT on this one although it was a tough choice,his shit just stood out to me more

[Lunatic]

1-1 thus far

[TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96']

The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme'

-weak opening and didn't make sense.. -3

-nice metaphor with the Hertz thing +1.5

-nother nice metaphor with "pke, but line preceding it was wack  + 0

-Great metaphor with the telephone poll "lines"  +3

-Clever finish, solid use of metaphor  +3


Score= 4.5

[Lunatic]

^so who u vote for infinite?

[TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96']

^so who u vote for infinite?

I was going to review them both individually then submit my vote.

[Lunatic]

^so who u vote for infinite?

I was going to review them both individually then submit my vote.

ahh, alright