Author Topic: work in progress  (Read 92 times)

da_notorious_mack

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work in progress
« on: August 12, 2008, 03:02:23 PM »
im turning enemies to burning effigies
no cures and no herbs and remedies
you worsen steadily from this murder
melody attack with a burst of energy
only the fake...ever flirt with jealousy
it why i aint heard a word ya tellin me
hurt ya terribly lift your skirt like Melanie
didnt know i hold the key to longevity


 

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Re: work in progress
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2008, 03:41:42 PM »
Maddd short, but good regardless.

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melody attack with a burst of energy
only the fake...ever flirt with jealousy
it why i aint heard a word ya tellin me