Just wasted 10 minutes on this

[Hittman]

K-E-Y-E-D (No Punches, Not Wasting Them)

This One Is Dedicated To All Those-It-Effects
The Recent-Textcees Here Only Rose-To-The-Best
By Biting Decent-Emcees Like Sha77er-S7ar
Cos' When They Write They Come Wit Wacker-Bars
Pimp Femcee, Mack, One Time & Even Maxi-Padz
And Now Indecisive Gives Them Rides Like Taxi-Cabs
Should I Mention Someone Who Bites Pacs-Name
They Might Bite, After All They Do Seriously Lack-Game
FUCK THEM! "I Only Bit Once" Is Macks-Claim
One Day You'll Grow Up And Stop Using Copy-And-Paste
Whos Gonna Bite The Most? Maxi Tops-The-Race
I Keyed This In Ten Minutes & Yeah Its My Own-Shit
Get The Fuck Away Indecisive, You Can't Loan-It

Nothing special, just had to get some shit off my chest.

[Gay-o Felony]

Wooooooo.... tryin to hide the truth... woooooo!

That was a waste of 10 minutes! <-- said this the 1st time, but PETER KAY deleted it, cant hide the truth...


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[Hittman]

Actually, I deleted your post because you were beefing for no reason. I dropped a rhyme and wanted feedback - not you saying I would cry if someone gave me good feedback. I know that aint the best verse in the world, I keyed it real quick. I can tell you right now that your verses that you spend time on haven't got shit on my keystyles.

[Gay-o Felony]

yea.. sure.. didnt take you long to conjer, coz it aint take you long to right whack keystyles, and you wanted feedback on your keystyle so that was mine..



Feedback: you did waste 10 minutes on your whack ryhme!

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[bLaDe]

Decent rhyme for your standered, but im feeling the main message, nice multies, peace

 -{bLaDe}

[Kill]

Should I Mention Someone Who Bites Pacs-Name
They Might Bite, After All They Do Seriously Lack-Game

First off "Pac" is pronounced like "Puc" so it don't rhyme with "lack". Fake double. If u were referin to me, go on and investigate, seek verses and lines I bit and grieve over the loss of time u could've spent hatin Mack at the end of the day

[Hittman]

I pronounce Pac like Pack. Thats how he pronounces it in his songs (Well its what it sounds like to me) "Call The Cops When You See 2 Paaac" If thats how its pronounced it definetely rhymes with lack.

[Kill]

I pronounce Pac like Pack. Thats how he pronounces it in his songs (Well its what it sounds like to me) "Call The Cops When You See 2 Paaac" If thats how its pronounced it definetely rhymes with lack.

naw, it's "two-puck". Listen to "How Long Will They Mourn Me" for example, does it sound like "Two-pack" or "two-puck in this mothafucka" ?

Or the chorus of "Just Don't Give A Fuck" (Eminem):

"so when u see me on ur block (which sounds like "bluck") with two glocks screamin fuck the world like 2pac..."

The lines above were bitten...

[Maestro Minded]

makavelithedon is correct...

"pac" rhymes with "block".. but not "black"

[Primo]

it is more like POCK...

[Gay-o Felony]

:. link=board=keystyle;num=1030467759;start=0#4 date=08/27/02 at 12:24:41]Decent rhyme for your standered, but im feeling the main message, nice multies, peace

 -{bLaDe}

ha! we have an "Immortal" dickryda!

[M Dogg™]

ha! we have an "Immortal" dickryda!

Nah... Logic got friends since it's only resently his been acting weird. bLaDe is THE champ too, so he knows lyrics. Personally, a desent keystyle, but it shows it's a keystyle. Also, not Logics typical formula for a rhyme, as it was more the old school style people like tha7th and I use, which Logic has voiced greatly against, saying it's wack.

[ToNe1904]

lol@ the argument over how to say "Pac"

[bLaDe]

ha! we have an "Immortal" dickryda!

Naw homie, im just giving him feedback, peace

 -{bLaDe}

[M Dogg™]

lol@ the argument over how to say "Pac"

Any westcoast fan who can't say 'Pac must have something wrong with them. Logic, you sure you a rap fan... j/k