Author Topic: "Fukin ~ Bitaz" -- Keystyle -- Feedback plz!  (Read 250 times)

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"Fukin ~ Bitaz" -- Keystyle -- Feedback plz!
« on: August 26, 2002, 12:00:51 AM »
Indecisive checkin in...
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I be the first to "roll - ova - biters" cant make they own way to tha top, need a lift like "hitch - hikerz"/ Now the "biters - become - fallers" come up and listen to "tha - heavyweight - brawlers" control you, we the "shot - callerz"/ Makin the moves like "busta - grove" i shake you up, give you an addrenaline rush make you "busta - move"/ Indecisive reppin tha "vets - n - true - playas" when we "bring - heat" you melt like "water" dissappear like you "evaporatours"/ Comin at ya "venomous - viper - catchers" taken out "venom - glands" like "biter - plans" catch you in tha act, "guilt - on - ya - hands"/ We "up - tha - gear" like the "shiftin - of - sands" we cause "collaterol - damage" smack ya back on track, now watch this "bitch - react"/ You give us ammo, like "popeye - and - spinnage" no matter how much "carnage" you cause we still override you with "protective - rules - n - laws"/ Now this Elite "member", scared your memory "forever" comin at ya lookin like you "named - a - murderer" the punishment, "exploiting - of - lyirkal - biter"/

Feedback plz.. i know it aint my best keystyle i can do.. but i was bored.. lol


IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY.. I LIKE TO USE KARMA TO DISS PEOPLE>>> COZ IM GAY! Elite are so manufactured... lol Elite are so last century.. they played out like my lyrics... Im gay!
 

da_notorious_mack

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Re: "Fukin ~ Bitaz" -- Keystyle -- Feedback plz!
« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2002, 12:19:32 AM »
it werent ya best but was still dope
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
 

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Re: "Fukin ~ Bitaz" -- Keystyle -- Feedback plz!
« Reply #2 on: August 26, 2002, 12:31:32 AM »
Thanx mack! ^^Uppin! More feedback!
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY.. I LIKE TO USE KARMA TO DISS PEOPLE>>> COZ IM GAY! Elite are so manufactured... lol Elite are so last century.. they played out like my lyrics... Im gay!
 

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Re: "Fukin ~ Bitaz" -- Keystyle -- Feedback plz!
« Reply #3 on: August 26, 2002, 01:00:17 AM »
Nice verse, pretty dope flow and wordplay
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
 

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Re: "Fukin ~ Bitaz" -- Keystyle -- Feedback plz!
« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2002, 03:42:42 AM »
^^uppin.. feeback plz!


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« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY IM GAY.. I LIKE TO USE KARMA TO DISS PEOPLE>>> COZ IM GAY! Elite are so manufactured... lol Elite are so last century.. they played out like my lyrics... Im gay!