"nightmares" please rate

[Pillow]

havent dropped a keystyle in a while so i was in tha mood and shti is what came out.....

Have u ever had a nightmare, that reminds u of life//
u wake up hesitatin to yawn, in tha mind set to fight//
Perinoid to tha facts//
ya life is spiralin vertical, so try to retrieve it wit political consience acts//
Were all rats in tha labratory of tha man//
we bite in to tha bait and wait to get digested like quik sand//
shakin tha devils hand//
It's unlikely, that we go to war like armored vikings//
we usually jus sit around believe dum shit like E.T sightings//
We still give 5-0 reactions//
while tha government continue to blast rockets, then charge more for taxes//
Chemical mistakes poison tha water supply//
All we do in tha hood is jus grow up then die//
no life to proceed, dyin from greed//
deep inside i want it too, but there's a bigger future i see//
So I continue to have nightmares about me and my dreams//
till they come reality and my true talent beams//
then I hit them with ecentrical verbs//
makin mother fuckas jus come back wit simple comments like "word"//
Get far in life, jus call me politically aware//
noticin that not all tha inner city kids rceive intensive care//
making this shit a famliy afair//
Tha thoughts and tha nightmares I have will make witch of Blair get scared//
I'm not tryin ta make a Fable or raise hair//
jus tellin ya ass that life isn't fair//

['Illicit']

dope piece, got audio written all over it lol. but this 1 verse alone stands for itself.

keep it up man, nice work

peace

[Pillow]

^^ thanks dogg, more feedback would be appriciated...

[bez]

I liked it very much, very very lyrical.  Well done.