Author Topic: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz  (Read 266 times)

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Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« on: June 30, 2002, 05:30:17 AM »
raw, rugged and fucked up
you worried coz i snuk up
from behind and blew ya mind
never ever had sex antyime of that kind
fuck you blind as long as you dont expect it again
you want me soo bad, but you cant hide it, dont pretend
how many other people have make your back bend
in twenty different positions leave your pussy in that condition?
and its tiwsted how my foreskin is blistered
for all the screwin' i been doin
fucked up like the american pie lubricate hand gluin'
but its weird how i still make all the bitches wet
i stick out my head n neck, so what do u expect?
a bomb between the sheets have girlz beggin at my feet
they want a piece of me where evea they can get it
respect it in the restroom, the gates to a church, bless you
i aint that fucked in the head, but we could make it so you are instead
people say 'reefa you gotta stop fuckin one day
that'll be the day i sit and prey i aint caught AIDS
 

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Re: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2002, 05:42:43 AM »
Y Dont I Seem To Get Ne Fuckin Feedback
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Re: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2002, 11:01:52 AM »
Yo, thanks for the comments dawg
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Re: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2002, 11:54:10 AM »
ay good shit gareefa. Good flow, tha lass line was like a reality check. keep spittin man.

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Re: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2002, 05:56:03 PM »
Tight Gareefa  ;)
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Re: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« Reply #5 on: July 02, 2002, 06:38:52 PM »
YEA ..YEA PUT IT OUT THERE, JIM HATS OR A NAP SACK. TIGHT FLOW
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Re: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2002, 06:08:25 AM »
Yo that was good homie. It really got good towards tha end, keep spittin'.
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Re: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« Reply #7 on: July 05, 2002, 11:46:16 PM »
That was dope dog.  I really liked it.
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Re: Jus A Quick Rhyme.. Feedbak plz
« Reply #8 on: July 07, 2002, 11:22:26 AM »
long time since i seen u rhymin...


tight shit. some of that old battlin-style..

i like it
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