Untitled Freestyle.. Drop Feedback Plz

[Reef]

this is as close 2 freestylin ima get without doin it verbally.. I wrote this in 10mins peep an drop feedback

Claws, Raw, Leave Emcees Sore//
Fuck Cleanin Out My Closet, Im Wiping The Floor//
With Any Muthafucker Who Choses To Go Aganst Me//
Im Kickin Your Ass Cause Im Quittin, I Aint An Emcee//
I Aint Fuckin With You When I Claim Im Unsatble//
No One Will Ever Be Able To Handle What Im Briinging To The Table//
Im Being Serious When I Challenge You To A Fight Music Don't Solve Shit//
Violence Is Where It's At//And The Way Im Feelin' Now You Won't Have A Chance To Hit Back//
I Call Anyone Out Who Can Kick My Ass Cause I Deserve It//
Tyson, Gracey, Lewis, If You Motherfuckers Think Im Worth It//
Break My Arms, Smash My Knee Caps//But Like Nate, I Fight Till I Collapse//
Underestimated Is My Middle Name//Im Blowin You Up Like The Plane And The Twin Towers//
Leave You Greeving For Hours, You Know What I Call You? Cowards//
Scared To Face The Harsh Reality//Life's A Bitch And not Worth Living//
But Death Is Cold And Unforgiving//
There's No Way Out//So We Might As Well Live This Bitch While We're In With A Shout//
Of Making Some Pathetic Difference//Judge Me By Appearence//
Well I Aint Wot I Appear To Be//Mentally Fucked Up Even My Own Family Fear Me//
I Fear The Damage I Could Cause//Swining My Fist Without Pause For Thought//
This Is What Im Taught//Strike Ask Questions Later//
Gareefa The grave creator, Number One masturbator//
Well This Is What I Am, Fuck The World Cause This Is How U Made Me//

[da_notorious_mack]

Fuck dawg,if youd write that a week earlier,you cud have put it in a collab of my version of cleanin out my closet,that was dope(ur keystyle not my 1)check mine out it called 'im sorry primo'

[ChildOfMuthaNature]

nice work Gareefa...i wonder what em & d12 would say about this...hehehe

[Entreri117]

Nice shit Reefa...damn tight drop right there!  Stay up homie!

[:.Da6shoota.:]

That shit was wack!!!

Trust me.  :-/

[Reef]

That shit was wack!!!

Trust me.  :-/

iight cool, i respect ur opinion.. unless ya want beef lol

[KVB]

Good freestyle... reading it was pretty entertaining, keep 'em coming.

One

[:.Da6shoota.:]

I'll rip your thesis to peices Gareefa...& I ain't laughin'  

[Reef]

I'll rip your thesis to peices Gareefa...& I ain't laughin'  

You obviously have some sort of fuckin problem.. and all your interested in is acting like a real Gangsta and makin u look 'hard'..

I couldnt give two shits wot u think.. take ur brown nose elsewhere..

['Illicit']

I'll rip your thesis to peices Gareefa...& I ain't laughin'  

wuahhahahahaha, aight now you kinda amusin me with your attitude.