Author Topic: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater  (Read 512 times)

Now_Im_Not_Banned

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14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« on: April 15, 2001, 02:41:14 AM »
Yo So Much Style/
Here's another rhyme child/
I'll rip you from here to the nile/
River/
Watch him shiver/
When I deliver/
These abnormal rhymes/
Over and over it's like a crime/
What I'm doin should be illegal/
Cuz I'm so damn Ruthless I'm worse then Benie Sigel/
The Mobster/
I'll eat you like lobster/
I'll rip you gladly/
Make ya mad at me/
and it's sad to see/
That you wanna battle me/
Cuz it's time for me to rip you apart/
I'm cold with no heart/
I'll stab you with darts/
I'll bash your head into a shopping cart/
You stink like a fart/
And ya rhymes do to/
I see ya crien muthafucka like Boo Hoo/
It's time to rip a mic/
I'ma just do it like Nike/
You don't wanna fuck with me like a dike/
But your rhymes are Okay...Sike/
They suck dick like ya momma/
And bite others like a parana/
It's time for me to demolish you/
Then polish you/
and make you new/
So your reply wont be as whack as before/
My neighbor can rhyme better and she's a blinde whore/
When I read ya shit it's like "snore" "snore"/
And when they read my shit, they like "more" "more"/
It's just another diss/
Now I'ma dissmiss/
You from my list/
Cuz I just got you badly/
And did it very gladly/
I see ya righting ya rhyme sadly/
Knowin you will lose/
And fuck with me, fuck with my duece duece/
I know you the type a kid to sit and watch' Blues Clues'/
Buta I'ma leave you alone know so you can learn your ones and two's/

Peace..No Beef

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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2001, 10:12:51 PM »
i eat you wanna b-mcs like easter dinner/
why yoour face look like it was thrown in paint thinner/
and like pizza hut im still waiting for your weak ass to deliver/
somethin even to touch my skills/
lyric-iiill sends chills down your spine, so you know this is somethin you can feel/
cause we know narrator always keeps it real/
and now i know why you want part 2/
i dispose of you/
and your whole crew/
so you better be equiped/
i come out from no where like a lunar eclipse/
so dont trip bitch/
your rhymes pile up like some dog shit/
i pull off a back flip and kick off your top lip/
so you cant rap anymore/
whoore i'll rip our your vocal cords/
and i'l rip out your moms vocal cords/
and i mean it/
i rip that shit out with my penis/
im demeaned/
the first battle was heated/
but this ones like  a red headed step child it gets beated and mis treated/
i leave now i know pleatin/
for a forgivness/
your chance of beating me in part 2/
is about the chance you have of your rhyme skills getting you in the guiness/
yo i gotta end this


PPEAACE
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Now_Im_Not_Banned

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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2001, 10:48:50 PM »
That was a pile of crap/
I never heard you rhyme like that/
I thought you was cool/
But now it's time for me to rule/
These battles/
Put ya feet in the sattle/
Cuz You gone get riddin on/
Spitted on/
Pimp slap you as if I was Ice T/
I'm the president, and you the Vice G/
Like Shade I'm Sheisty/
Bitches nice ta me/
Talkin about being equiped/
Equiped with a Rubba dick/
A dildo/
You hump pilows/
While ya finger ya ass/
When ya done with that ya stick ya dick in the grass/
Cuz you to ugly to buy a ho/
Offered 20 million dollas but she wanted mo'/
Cuz you look like you came out of a dog/
And the only thing you have is a fake cock/
cuz your real one is to small to see/
So next time you be callin me/
make sure you hire a real MC/
Ta write ya rhyme/
and not bite mine/
Like Tha Realest a fake Pac/
I'll take ya down with only 1 shots/
Ask yaself..Who's hot?/
You not/
Cuz NIK is/
And I get the thickest Bitches/
Use a gimp 'N'/
I rip you aparts cuz ya limpin/
From my dick 'N'/
It got stuck in ya mouth/
Cuz it was to big, you sound like ya mom when ya shout/
How ya like my rhyme/
I think it's time/
For me to go, and that was my last line/



Peace...



 

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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2001, 08:11:11 PM »
you nasty/
hasnt it be/
came a lame game if you cant maintain/
without these stories volgur and gay/
fake dildo fucking ass/
talkin bout you gon' go all the way/
what the fuck is up with that/
thickest?/
i know you likeyour bitches fat/
like your mother/
the trucker broke the rubber/
the nut splattered on her flubber/
but it some how made it in now nik i know you love her/
so now we're even/
you best be believin/
you wanna ask jeeves then/
tell me whats the definition of style/
narrator, naw i aint the average child/
i've always been better than the best of the top/
it dont stop/ no i aint gonna pull a 187 on a cop/
cause im no gangsta or a g/
and neither are you your just a wanna-b/
believe me/
you cant come close to the skill ive achieved/
your still writing nersery rhymes/
i can write a whole book of lyrics in aobut half the time/
it takes you to write a bars, about 9/
its asinine/
but style stays on the grind/
you beating me in this battle/hmmm your chances are about as much as shyne getting away with the crime!!!!!

HAAAAA u got beeat

peace
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Now_Im_Not_Banned

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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #4 on: April 16, 2001, 08:54:32 PM »
I thought of this one in class......

You gone diss me again?/
Be a real man/
And stop bullshittin/
That shit's no freestyle, it was writtin'/
By some writer/
Who's whiter/
And lighter/
Than you/
You aint got no balls, must be the Mountain Dew/
Like Bus-A-Bus/
I gotta cuss/
It's a must/
Like drivin a car/
While you rididn a Razor, that aint gettin you far/
I step on you like tar/
And do it really hard/
with all my strength/
I'm a whole, u's a tenth/
I know I'm so muthafuckin spectacula'/
But I aint givin the mic back to ya/
Cuz I can do this all day/
I turn straight men gay/
With the rhymes that I say/
Cuz I'm so damn good, I'll even turn ya hair gray/
If it isn't by now/
Don't dare ask how/
You can't fight the addiction/
You need me in ya system/
So you just start dissin/
Thinkin I will listen/
You want mor friction/
Between us/
But I gotta go pissin/
With my big penis/
So I'm out till next-time/
ya mom is on the bed so I think it's sex-time/

Peace...

i hope that ones a lil better..LOL



 

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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #5 on: April 17, 2001, 05:50:20 PM »
dude, iu dont have time to write right now, and im not dissing you, but that last one was 1000 X suckier than your others...your first one was better.
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Now_Im_Not_Banned

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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #6 on: April 17, 2001, 08:27:46 PM »
^^^
 

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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #7 on: April 17, 2001, 11:36:55 PM »
Reply to that...
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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #8 on: April 27, 2001, 12:10:41 AM »
Expect anotha one up and runnin' by tommorow...For now I'm tired, so yall will have to wait..And I hope Narater replies this time! And dont pussy out...JK LOL
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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2001, 12:38:58 PM »
yo dude, this whole week i was busy, i had baseball games 4 days of the week and a humongus party at my house last night, and now i have to go clean that shit up. :P
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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #10 on: April 28, 2001, 08:30:20 PM »
Still no reply?/
I dare not ask why/
Cuz we all know you’ll just lie/
This is a real battle/
And you get sacrificed like cattle/
I know my rhymes never fail/
To make you pale/
Cuz just like mouse, I gotta tale/
And here’s a tale I need ta tell/
My rhymes are always hot as if I was born in hell/
These rhymes are something everyone should peep/
And ya rhymes are so boring,   they make me fall asleep/
You can rap about bling all ya want/
But you shouldn’t rap about shit you aint got/
A million bux will blow ya mind/
But ya hands cant spend, what ya eyes can’t find/
You aint nutthin but a geek/
And I don’t wanna hear ypu speak/
Cuz ya style was bitten, and mines unique/
Your like a puppet man, you can’t do ya own thing/
You always got this stupid muthafucka pullin ya string/
Muthafucka, I aint playin around/
I’ll pull out my heat and lay you on the ground/
I’m a rhyme enforcer/
A pain endorser/
You already pussyed out and it’s just the first quarter/
Fire burns, and it don’t feel nice/
But it takes a real sucka to get buned twice/
So I shock you like lightning/
When I’m writing/
Reciting/
And frightening…/
You anotha time/
You aint exciting/
Cuz your just biting/
Anotha rappaz rhyme/
Ya it’s just anotha classic/
I know you want tha mic, so know I’ma pass it/
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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #11 on: April 28, 2001, 10:53:37 PM »
yo now i know you wanna battle/
i grab your neck by the handfull/
cut out your fucking adams apple/
then throw you back into a time capsule/
where the 70's would even pass you/
cause your style's getting old like you mamas cooch/
who let me loose/
now imma abuse this rhyme fuse/
we know your gonna lose/
so you might as well give up now/
your more wack than kunal hak in pow wow/
so i suggest you bow down!/
from here now/
narrator takin this keystyle shit over/
luck of the  clover, show her, then bend her over/
cause anyone can compete/
but few succeed to complete when they battlin me/
now i wanna you to all to vote on whos the dopest young anglo saxon/
i think i just beat nik like i slapped him with a bandhand/
so all of you vote, tanjint, ka rule, even you da assasin!/


PEEEEEACE
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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #12 on: April 29, 2001, 12:27:30 AM »
Haha, rhymin the same wordz twice/
So I'm shootin ya lights out like Glen Rice/
I know ya cant stand me as if I was lice/
Or a high priced.../
CD/
You see these?/
Nutz/
Now place 'em in ya mouth, and shut tha fuck up/
Cuz ya cant rhyme/
This battles mine/
And you can't flow/
You need to grow/
and go.../
Through puberty/
And get some tutering/
To learn how to spell/
As if we can't tell/
U's hooked on Phonix/
Don't say that it's ebonix/
Or that you was smokin Chronic/
Cuz it's very obviouse/
Your rhymes are the sloppiest/
And I can't stand readin them/
Yet beliving them/
Cuz they so damn fake/
So just stop rhymin for ya own sake/
You need a re-take/
Or just take these lines/
And shove em up ya ass it would make a nice design/
For ya momma/
You know she used to rape you, and you still wanna..//
Have her in bead/
You wanna.. spread her legs/
And make her give you head/
You know... She makes ya dick grow/
And she makes you wanna blow/
Then unload loads/
Of seemen/
You wanna hear her screamin/
Like a ho/
For mo'/
So please just go/
And lay Low/
If ya know/
whats good for you, yo/
before I show.../
You my dick, and stick it throw ya gap/
Make you sit on Whoriders lap/
So please just stay off my dick/
Cuz ya rhymes are so stupid, that they makin me sick/
Oh yea and the chances of you defeatin me/
Is the chances of Puff Daddy, beina real G/
 

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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #13 on: April 29, 2001, 12:28:13 AM »
OK, thats it...
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Re: 14 and under part 2!!! Narrater
« Reply #14 on: June 13, 2002, 04:50:26 PM »
With me here...in the words of Kurt Cobain..Smells like teen spirit...LOL sorry i had to.,...Nirvana is dope,aight? anyway,i give a vote to each...NIk has a little more intlellect savvy but SMS has a little more battle savvy....but since Nik came whacker on one verse i give it too sms if i can't vote for both but your best verses were equal IMo....what's that little birdy/ since i'm 14 is should drop a verse?? okay!!!


i come through
with more lyrical king fu
or is your preference jujitsu?
those lyrics also hitchu
comin up with nothin just dressin it up
shootin at the stars messing with luck
and fate truth covered insecurity
burns to me?
nothing but surface scratches
no matter what your objectives i doubt the purpose matches
to my goals that's grandiose
see tha mics? hand me those!
so i can go offa nothin but premeditate it
outshine MC's that's better than me cuz they hesitated
let this go because this is hollow rappin about rappin
laughin the actionb being executed
how many egos did my repute hit?
new shit from me,not a symphony just bare bones
scared homes
and their residents
it's evident my skill still heavensent


eh....i know i'm kinda off today but i just felt like droppin cuz you guys are 2 of my faves mcs and friends on the board so i wanted to give you guys a little more....keep it up,One Love and peace!-Tanjint
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