Anutha Keystyle

[Entreri117]

Yo, check this shit out:


I'm a born star-studded thrilla, angry like a gorilla/
I ain't no killa, but I'll go insane just like Atilla//
War god and battle legend, call me Genghis Kahn/
or you can call me "Fat Joe" cuz I'm a maufuckin don//
I'll bite you and crush you like a tyrannosaurus/
all ya rhymes just bore us, go read a thesaurus//
I will beat you untill you're lyin dead upon the floor/
then I'll ressurect you, and assualt your corpse even more//
I'm a stealth fighter, I work for the covert operations/
me droppin flows is as important as proper sanitation//
Practicin too much masturbation will cause the shit to hit the fan/
Caught with ya pants down...I proclaim your turf to be my land//
Your lack of intelligance and knowledge is your disadvantage/
By the time I'm done with you, you gonna leave wrapped in Ace Bandages//
Its unfortunate I'm smashin your cranium even though its fragile/
I've done it millions of times, go check out my criminal file//
I'm leavin your entire crew in denial, can't believe you got fucked up by a teen/
I'm showin you shit you ain't seen, later makin your vocal cords scream//
With my lryical punches, I'm erasin you from the books of history/
Untill your family finds your face upon the TV show Unsolved Mysteries//

[Entreri117]

Please gimme some feedback on this rhyme...


(A kid tryin to advance his lyrical abilities...)

[Entreri117]

C'mon people...please don't sleep on my shit...

Give me some feedback!