SOME1 BATTLE ME!!! MY RHYME IS ALREADY POSTED

[DJ_Phiasko]

This rhyme is kinda a story about a guy, altho i rap it in fist person, who is tryin' to be initiated into a gang, and at the end there is a twist to the story... don't take everything literally, look for the metaphors....



Yo i pack a heat as heavy as any / ready? when you see me, i'm already / in the back of the car, holdin' the rifle steady / red eye in the scope / loaded of dope / hopin' i won't / fail, and get left floatin' thrown off of the boat / these are just the steps for the innitiation / you gotta penetrate five bodies / so thats five people less in this nation / and we've already lost over five thousand in five hour duration / taken place on 9-11, with everlasting effects duratin' centuries with no compinsation / you gotta have patience / waitin' for the day u reunite with these people in heaven's salvation / well now my minds trailed off, and i'm back to the trigga / watchin' my prey... "oh shit i know that nigga" / wut do i do now / there's no way out / so i put the gun to my head, and let off 1 round / and without a sound, i silently drop to the ground / tear drops mixed blood violenty consume the people all around / that's just to show you in this game thers no escape / cuz in the end, your the bitch with the bruises on yah ass from gettin' "raped"

[DJ_Phiasko]

FIRST 5 votes wins!

[da_notorious_mack]

Pay Attention,
cuz I'm steppin with this lyrical weapon, just messin,
I'm caressin this profession with intention on reppin every minute and second,
and I reckon that the tech's drawn like BOSTON and ANTOINE,
puttin 8 in ya chest, now your heart pumps out ya neck,
I just wreck, any set, any rookie, any vet,
gimmie 10 minutes an I just took out your best,
with REAL Big MACK's that attack nigga's backs, spittin facts that'll crack any combat with an act,
so sit back, cuz you wack, hold up a second, listen black,
You wanna learn how to rap?
first learn how to stack, learn how to strap, and then learn how to pack,
learn how to scrap, an then learn how to stack,
but most important of all is to learn that you couldn't SLAM on a TRACK if you threw up an ALLEY-OOP in the BOOTH to T-MAC or SHAQ,
scy an mack11 connection,
we install fear in all when we brawl,
don't PASS the BALL and it's DEATH 2 ALL as bullets PIERCE ya lungs up like PAUL,
ya'll may REBOUND off the floor,
but your still RUNNING with ROOKIES like MEMPHIS with BATTIER and GASOL,
man ya'll couldn't SELL if you were ON SALE in the MALL,
came out 18.99, ya'll like a mix between BIGGIE and ALICIA KEYS, cuz the price is READY TO FALL,
I try to preach to ya'll but you ain't tryin ta hear it, first hour out and ya cd already been destined for CLEARANCE,
stainin ya spirits with lyrics ya'll hear it an fear it,
Ya'll took a REAL hit with the steel quick and ya better jump ship cuz we bout to commandeer it,
with metaspheric components that rip the hearts out opponents,
fillin all quotients with HOLES that TIM couldn't DUNK IN,
ya'll just DOUGH-NUTS,
your flow's rust, Our's cold crushed wit no rush, we leave your crew hushed,
spittin nuecleonic verses that'll readily combust,
any hater best trust,
we leave crews defense-luss when the lead bust,
we like WET PAINT cuz can't no team STAND AGAINST US.....

YO NO BEEF DAWG,U HERD HIM THO 1ST 2 5 VOTEZ,NO DIKRIDIN VOTEZ I HOPE

[.:R-E-L:.]

I felt Notorious Mack's flow better but towards the end it was gettin kinda bad, but overall good, use bigger vocab at parts.....

Phiasko- I wasnt really feelin ur flow, i felt the bars were long until they got 2 a rhyme

so my vote goes 2 Notorious Mack

[da_notorious_mack]

YO FANX DAWG I WOZ RUNNIN OUT OF IDEAS 2WARDS DA END 1-0 2 ME

[DJ_Phiasko]

Wadup... just wanted to say much props to Notorious Mack, i loved the flow in your rhyme... ima producer so i usally don't rhyme but i do every1nce in a while... anyways, good job, i liked it alot... better than most

[ROCCY]

Yo Phiasko that is the best Ive seen u drop so far homie...keep it up I was feeeling some lines u did they where off he hook..but Norious Mack Gets my vote...I was feelng him shit more..but both keep spitting PEACE..

VOTE= NM

[Hittman]

Da Notorious Mack Took This Easily. Great Rhyme Homie..!