Im thinking this is the first track to my demo.

[Nightmare]

[This is like a intro for my demo..the first track...it isnt done yet but this is was i have so far so tell me if ya like it or think its crap.]

Tick Toc
the clock strikes 12
the bell starts to ring
a chill goes through the air
and ya see a dark shadow mysteriously appear
I have arrived
its time for a new era
a new time has come
I bet all of u didnt expect this one
i cought everyone off guard
cought them by surprise
the new kid has officaly arrived

Im coming into everysingle persons dream
i might scare ya
i might make ya love me
but one things for sure
after this u cant get enough of me

Im nightmare
a fantasy
people soon will wanna be just like me

I'm like a drug
like crack and weed
im so mother fucking addicting
u can't get off of me
there is no treatment
re-hab wont work
it will be just a waste of time
and it will drive ya biserk