THA PAIN OF BEIN ALONE (please read)

[HBKid_Jr]

wanan be wit you katie//
i wanna be you man an u be my lady//
but thats like askin a impossible//
chances of gettin wit you aint even questionable//
its obvious i aint got a chance//
too much of a bitch to make an advance an create a romance//
so i stay my distance//
does she even realize my existance//
this is me showin my sincerity//
you got your popularity//
why would u get wit me an lower your level//
only chance i have would involve help from tha devil//
your looks are beyond impressive//
time ticking down jus leading to my depression//
no matter what i would treat you right//
jus wanan hold you tight all through tha night//
but i realize a girl like u is way outta my sight//
never treat you wit neglect jus tha utmost respect//
never like an object ill treat you correct//
im mature beyond my years cuz i grew up poor//
my lifes like a giant eye sore//
know i cant off u much//
except my trust do anything for once to feel you gentle touch//
so for now im slip open an dutch//
roll it up an take a puff//
it helps me get throught tha times that are tough//
so dont worry i wont waste your times//
cuz imma jus keep my shit in my rhymes//
bein wit u would be my heaven//
never say never cuz maybe one day me an u would be together//
but to you katie im jus tha quiet kid that sits in tha back//
wishin he was black

i know it aint fulled wit mutis an all that shit u guys wanna see but bein real wit myself is more important than anything else,  if any1 is nice enough,  would they mind rating this,  if its wack jus say it is

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

Man, I waz feelin dat 4 sho.....good shit.....

I feel yur pain man, but I tell wats stronger than pain?

HOPE

[maxi-padz]

maybe u aimen to high dawg like in them movies.. ya know this girl to me sounds like sum uptigth snotty lil slut who dont deserve a dick in the ass on a drunken prom night and sent to hospital to receive stitches.. but fa real approach her foo.. may osund corny but u got nothen to loose. thats what i used to think n trust me i have hesitated b4 which has fucked up a good relationship..

well now for the rhyme... good lyrical content nothen special with the flow or anything else but ya content made me wanna read the next line not caus of sum multis met4 or anyhing else.. keep spitten n bein real with ya self..

~1~

[Hittman]

The Content Was A Good Read, It Had No Fillers, In That Section. You Also Managed To Keep Up An Above Average Flow. If It Had Had Some Multis And Also The Tight Content This Verse Would Have Been Dope To Read.

[doggmastah]

;DTight shit man! Keep at it! Peace!

[Trauma-san]

Ha, you rock.  I like this one too, you're Real, that's awesome.  

BTW, I don't agree with Maxi: YOu're not aimin' too high.  If you think you are, you'll never get anybody good!  Just go after the girls you like, peace~

[infinite59]

Yo dogg.... tight shit I loved the ending homie... Because I've been there before, I've had girls straight up say behind my back that they didn't like me because I acted black....I guess if I were a Mettalica or Nickelback t-shirt and played the giutar I'd be cool.......they can suck my muthafuckin dick.... I'll spit in those bitches faces.......Anyway....tight shit... your a real muthafucka, an individual, give them bitches the middle finger, or maybe they can meet you half way and make peace, they'll be girls out there that ain't fake bitches, real recognize real, they're few and far between, but you're already there..... peace, one.

[Flowmatic]

yo whats crackin tom that was a tight ass rhyme i was feelin it fo shezzy.......

halla back y'all

one

[BossPlaya]

well now for the rhyme... good lyrical content nothen special with the flow or anything else but ya content made me wanna read the next line not caus of sum multis met4 or anyhing else.. keep spitten n bein real with ya self..
~1~

DONT LISTEN 2 THA COPY N PASTE KING CUZ THAT SHIT WAS TIGHT TIGHTER.....I BET U GUYZ N E THING MAXI ALREADY USED THIS RHYME @ N OTHER BOARD...LMAO

[ITW [the irish boy]]

My mam once said " Aim for the sky, and you'll hit the roof"

Some read into it wrong, but I say, if you do sports, aim for the olympics, music the oscars, girls the models. Know what I mean.

If anything worked for me it's just (i know it's cheesy) be charming. Talk to them, smile a lot. I do sports and shit, so girls think I'm on the same level as them (cept the bitches) but I used to be considered below them. It may not seem it, but it's a very thin line to cross that you dont realise till you try. That girl would be a fool to say no. I say get to know her first though. I know the 3 most wanted girls in school, and i know them too well, and I wouldnt want to be with them.
Keep ya head up.
And the rhyme was a breath of fresh air in the intoxicating smoke of metapphors and multis

[LyRiCaL_G]

hey yo that was tight shit man, and like someone sed, fuck what maxi said, he probably already copy n pasted it onto his next board!!!lmao!!!!1 shiiiiiiiiiiit thats funny!