Author Topic: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh  (Read 258 times)

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CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« on: February 20, 2002, 06:02:28 PM »
In Disturbed-Hypocrisy, my brain and inner conscious now Converge-Hypnotically/
With the Birth-Of-Promising, inexhaustible Earthly-Offerings/
Strongly-manipulated, we learn to Return-Them-Audibly/
My First-Debauchery, Fondly-Reciprocated in a Verse-Of-Prophecy/
Watching-Death, my Body-Wept as its Curse-Is-Calling-Me/
My Thirst-For-Following, Irrevocable-Wicked-Tendencies is bowing my head in Fear-Of-Notable-Vicious-Entities/
Through Gifted-Sentencing, I mimic how Simplistic-Our-Enemies/
Then grimace at Twisted-Epiphanies, and exhaust our souls before they Finish-Replenishing/
Through faith, we chased an emptiness and Disregarded-Truth/
Then-Discarded-Use of a metaphorically forbidden Garden’s-Fruit/
In-Darkened-Rooms, Writing-Mysterious-Compositions-To-Make-A-Seedling-Grow-Sincerity/
Describing-Serious-Competitions-Embraced-By-A-Beating-So-Embarassing/
Breathing-Slow, But-Cherishing-The-Fact-I-Had-A-Chance/
To war with demons who Unbearably-Attack-My-Staggered-Stance/
A Captured-Glance, methodically elusive to Human-Bastard-Chants/
Shattered-Plans, demolishing a dispute Inconclusive-As-Facts-Advance/
Through a Time-Space continuum to influence Congruence-With-Master-Plans/
The-Fatter-Lamb, let’s consume its flesh with the Heavenly-Flame-Of-Sacrifice/
Dissecting friends and deadly sins of Seven,-We-Blame-The-Afterlife/
Factor-My, Personal-Degree of incurable Terminal-Disease, and if nothing alleviates my strain...Then-Laughter-Might…[/color]


yesturday was one of those days i felt bored,angry,evil, thoughtfull,phillosophical at times.. and i was in good mood for multis.. i got a few more but they a pain in the ass to type out..

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Re: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2002, 06:11:49 PM »
Good stuff. Your flow is tight as hell on the real.
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Re: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2002, 06:33:08 PM »
Tight shit homie.... it's strikingly clear that writing is your salvation.. and through it you will soon find yourself.. keep blessin the board with the dopeness...peace
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Re: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2002, 06:40:21 PM »
it aint really my salvation but when i got shit on my chest i like to spit about it or if its on my mind i like getting it on paper.. thanx fo tha love

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Re: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« Reply #4 on: March 01, 2002, 01:01:18 PM »
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Re: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« Reply #5 on: March 02, 2002, 02:44:18 AM »
is maxi using short bars?? :o :o

anyway, tight shit...outstanding multis
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Re: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« Reply #6 on: March 02, 2002, 05:04:39 PM »
^i usually use longer barz in battles as i try and do complex punches.. but i never stick to the same style

thanks for the props

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Re: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« Reply #7 on: March 02, 2002, 06:31:23 PM »
Yo... even though I didn't understand the meaning of most of your metaphors... I won't doubt that it's a great rhyme... keep 'em comin.
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Re: CHaSiNg CaReLeSsNeSs To OuR dEaTh
« Reply #8 on: March 02, 2002, 06:57:55 PM »
^lol fa sho
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