Second day of verses...I-BO

[ITW [the irish boy]]

Verse must be 15-20 bars

This is not a battle, a poetic verse...

On the second day of verses
A woman searches for stolen purses
What's worse is, this woman
Doesn't know what hurt is
She walks around all day
With thoughts flowing thru her membrane
Her train of thought has no way of connecting
Mine, His, Hers, Their, lives all are the same
The man on the sidewalk must feel no pain
He must have choices
A place to go when it rains
I guess it was a feign
When the man was found slain
When he muttered in the gutter
It's all just a dirty game

IRISH THUG WANNABE

[Maestro Minded]

yo... no disrespectin .... but I-BO dont writes poetic shit .... im not acceptin this challenge ...

if you wanna test mah skillz on a battle.. im cool with that..


peace

[TimeLock]

UUUUUUM nice pic i-bo

[ITW [the irish boy]]

Then post a battle verse, 15 bars, and we'll have poetic vs battle

[Maestro Minded]

nah .. it aint fair ... it will be to easy to win ...

lets make it like this .... ill try to write down a poetic rhyme .... but it will be my first poetic rhyme ever, so dont expect miracles ... + i dont want this to be counted in the top10-list


u down??

[Maestro Minded]

UUUUUUM nice pic i-bo

yeah .. thats the avreage brain-size of the cats im battelin over here

['Illicit']

yeah .. thats the avreage brain-size of the cats im battelin over here

U WISH HOMIE!!!! U WISH.          lol

[Miss NWA Whoorider]

                 HEAVEN'S ROSE
THERE WAS A ROSE IN MY BACKYARD
THAT WAS HEAVEN SENT
IT HAD A WILD SMELL TO IT
CAUSE IT WAS HEAVEN SENT
I HAD NO IDEA AT THAT TIME
THAT ROSES HAVE SEASONS TOO
SO THIS IS WHY I WRITE THIS POEM
AND AM SENDING IT TO YOU
SEE ONE DAY I LOOKED OUT
ON MY HEAVENS ROSE
IT HAD GROWN SO TALL
THE ANGELS WATERED THAT ROSE
AND FED IT GOOD ROSE FOOD
SO IT WOULD GROW LIKE IT SHOULD
AND I THOUGHT AT THAT TIME
THAT IT WOULD LIVE FOREVER
BUT WHAT I DID NOT REALIZE
WAS EVERYTHING HAS A SEASON
AND EVERYONE HAS THEIR TIME
WHEN ALL OF MUST LIVE AND
ALL OF US MUST DIE
ONE DAY A PETAL FELL FROM THE ROSE
MY SPIRIT FELL AND A TEAR ROSE
FROM MY EYES ONTO THE GROUND
BUT I DID NOT KNOW WHY
A PRETTY ROSE HAD TO LOSE ITS PETAL
AND I FELT LIKE A CRY
AS WEEKS WENT ON THERE WAS NO MORE PETALS
BUT ONE DAY THERE WAS ANOTHER
AND THEN THE NEXT DAY AND THE NEXT UNTIL
IT WAS A SHOWER
OF ROSE PETALS ON THE GROUND
THEN I HAD A VISITOR
SHE SAID GIVE HER HEAVENS ROSE'
SHE SAID IT WOULD GROW UP THEIR BETTER
SHE TOOK IT AND WAS GONE
I WATCHED THAT ROSE FROM MY WINDOW
THEY PLACED IT IN THE STARS
AND IT HAS GROWN A BRAND NEW BLOOM
U CAN C IT FROM WHERE I STAND
SO I TELL YOU ERIC WAS LIKE THAT ROSE
SOMETIMES ITS OUR LIFE AND SOMETIMES IT GOES
AROUND LIKE THIS ITS SOMEONES TIME
IN SOMEONES ELES SPACE
YAHWEH TAKES THEIR ROSE
AND PUTS SOMEONE IN THAT PLACE
A PERSON THAT CAN UNDERSTAND
A PERSON THAT CAN HOLD YOUR HAND
KNOW THAT THAT ROSE IS STILL GROWING
AND KNOW THAT YEAHWEH EVER KNOWING
HAS PUT UPON ERIC'S HEART
THE LOVE YOU HAVE FOR HIM