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Third day of verses...Tone
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ITW [the irish boy]
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Third day of verses...Tone
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January 26, 2002, 10:50:44 AM »
Verse must be 15-20 bars
This is not a battle, a poetic verse
On the third day of verses
The air swells with swears and curses
Clawing and kicking
Clicking and crazes
While down on the main street
An eternal inferno blazes
Whimpers of Please Stop
Muffled by screams from the rooftop
Sky illuminated
By blue and red
Arrival of the white cop
Too late to break
The cycle of fate
He brings a mop to clean the debris
Of the torn down remnants of an unequal society
IRISH THUG WANNABE
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SO MANY PEOPLE THINK THEY KNOW
BUT DO THEY KNOW TO THINK
THINK ABOUT THINKING
BEFORE THEY KNOW NOTHING
DID THEY KNOW SOMETHING
LETS THINK
ToNe1904
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Re: Third day of verses...Tone
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January 26, 2002, 12:32:23 PM »
tight ITW. ima write when i get home frum work tonight...
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ToNe1904
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Re: Third day of verses...Tone
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January 27, 2002, 12:49:53 AM »
Like the mind of a kite with no string
Nothing to hold me down, im a KING
Just some "dumb fool" thats never been to college
But still Im whisked away by the winds of knowledge
True, I cannot physically fly
So why even try? I let loose a sigh
But the Elevation of my Imagination touches the sky
Others teach, so that I may learn, but now it is my turn
To give back, what others truly yearn
The thirst for information
Formal or Real Life education
We have limits yes
And yet still limitless
Put my mind to the test
And it will refuse to rest
Aiight....uhh....vote yall lol. n rememba...this AINT a battle! lol
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Re: Third day of verses...Tone
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January 27, 2002, 12:56:32 AM »
My Vote Goes To ToNe.
"Others teach, so that I may learn, but now it is my turn
To give back, what others truly yearn"
ITW, I Thought That Was One Of The Weaker Verses Of The 4 YOu Posted.
Both Were Dope Though.
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Re: Third day of verses...Tone
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January 27, 2002, 04:06:12 PM »
votes yall!!
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Re: Third day of verses...Tone
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January 27, 2002, 09:58:10 PM »
lol@tone's skeleton pic callin' people to vote...
i was feelin tones shit more
my vote = tone
peace
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bLaDe
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Re: Third day of verses...Tone
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January 27, 2002, 10:26:40 PM »
both were tight, i wuz just feelin tones verse a lil more...
"Like the mind of a kite with no string"
"Others teach, so that I may learn, but now it is my turn
To give back, what others truly yearn"
nice shit from both of ya'll
vote = ToNe
-{bLaDe}
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Its Just Me Against The World, And The Evil That He Made...
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Re: Third day of verses...Tone
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January 27, 2002, 10:31:24 PM »
coo, 3-0
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