First Day of Verses...TimeLock

[ITW [the irish boy]]

Must be 15 bars to 20....
Not a battle, a poetic verse...

On the first day of verses
I unearthed
A platoon of herses
Complete with casket, undertakers
And a whole pile of nurses
That underwent an event
That personifys what I represent
Of unrelenting fury and evil
That even a begal couldn't scent
What is meant by these images
Envisaged in the minds of people
Consequently
Your bodies upheaval
This is the sequal of the unequal
Feeble words can't equal evil

IRISH THUG WANNABE

[TimeLock]

hip-hop is not just a form of music, so don't get confused with it/
it's a form of lyrical and rhythmic expression/
it's a way of life often expressed with depression/
We use it in for battling, but now I'm using it for conscious rhyme saddling/
be true to the hip-hop way of life, it's not a tool to promote beating your wife/
Hip Hop is big now, it's spread out with many hears/
it's sad that all the fake kats (Ja-Rule) are the ones with big careers/
we are the New Hip-Hop Community (N.H.C), we're spread out across the World Wide Vicinity (W.W.V.)/
me I'm a small representation of what sweeps the nation/
just a small fragment of the what hip-hop is, yet I'm still one of many that controls the biss/
see we are all in this hip-hop shit together, and our decisions control it's moods but they change just like the weather/
cuz though were like a big family we still can never agree on what is hip-hop and what is not/
in conclusion i think the is the solution is stop the promotion of wackness by record distribution/

one

.:TimeLock:. AKA .:Son of Time:.

[maxi-padz]

nice from both.. itw was nice but didnt really have a dope topic.. timelock got his feeligns out about a tigth topic and stayed on topic for his whole verse.. and was way mo interesting...

vote - timelock

~1~

[KVB]

I'ma vote for TimeLock.

[Flowmatic]

i vote time lock because his made more sense to me


vote= timelock

[KVB]

TimeLock wins once again... I'ma put an end to it.