Author Topic: Last day of verses...tha7th (Read 125 times)

ITW [the irish boy] · « **on:** January 26, 2002, 10:55:43 AM »

Must be 15-20 bars

This is not a battle, a poetic verse

On the last day of verses
We subconciously searh oblivion
This is the new world we are living in
No beef, no cheats, certainly no barrier reef
We've diffused evil like light in a prism
Reaping the rewards of freedom
Or is it communism
I'll rise from the ground, elevate
And segregate
The real from the fake
Iron clad soldiers make
A call out to maxi padz
When I finish this battle
I'll rip you in irish style fashion
Bring on ITW vs Automatic Assasain

IRISH THUG WANNABE

ZILLA THA GOODFELLA · « **Reply #1 on:** January 26, 2002, 11:19:48 AM »

Oh tight.......This is a good idea.......

Aiight, No Battle.......

Blame me for the whisk of knives, in turn tha risk of lives/
Tha wisp of lies, that resulted in alibis/
The tricks of minds, that grow up to be fucked up from what my shit implies/
Yur jewelry may squint your eyes, but a gat's brighter than your iced chest/
Cuz bullets maybe cheaper than diamonds, but what they take from you is "priceless"/
Daring to quiet this, then sow my lips shut/
But still my shit bust, harder than when your dick nuts/
Forces of a nation flow through my veins/
King of this thing and the dream of elemental planes/
Heat and defeat so hot only tha ashes of yur skeletal frame remains/
Got no time 4 bullshit cuz I have no patience/
Wat can I say, Im just a youth of a nation.......

ZILLA THA GOODFELLA · « **Reply #2 on:** January 26, 2002, 08:46:32 PM »

Vote people.........

KVB · « **Reply #3 on:** January 26, 2002, 08:51:39 PM »

Tha7th, easily.
ITW didn't have an single punchline.

'Illicit' · « **Reply #4 on:** January 26, 2002, 09:39:41 PM »

well poetically you can definately notice ITW trying his best, but tha7th is simply more skilled so he took this. i think if ITW was on his level this would've been great.

no disrespect

ToNe1904 · « **Reply #5 on:** January 26, 2002, 11:40:16 PM »

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Tha7th, easily.
ITW didn't have an single punchline.

this is tha prollem with settin up these threadz ITW. i aint dissin u KVB. its jus, this isnt set up as a battle. so there shouldnt be punchlines. its a poem. voters shouldnt judge these based on tha normal criteria of a battle.