Cyborg-Ninja vs. M Dogg

[M Dogg™]

Ha Ha.... I wonder if I can get just a practice, so my record ain't affected. Anyway Cyborg-Ninja, hit me back and I'll drop first. no bar limit, and first to 3 votes period, because it ain't a serious battle. Respond when ready.

[Cyborg-Ninja]

K man, im ready, may the best Emcee win.! I would just like to say.. Good Luck ..!

M-Dogg, is that your name//
Well you met the man who'll put your name to shame//
Dont wanna get burned by the flame//
Let me put you in the right frame of mind//
I aint that nice, and i aint that kind//
Its like this//
I'm comin at ya with a tennis ball and a racket//
i pull the pin outta my grenade an' smack it//
its the most explosive serve in the world//
an when you attempt to return, it'll have ya in pieces//
Try and return the favour//
Rember to release it, from those little hands//
Then cover your ears for when it lands//
Even tho its on my side//
Your be shittin your pants//
Justy remember, your messin with the Ninja//
I'll fuck wid ya head, your be lyin on the floor dead//
Ill tear you to shreds//
You come around sayin shit about me//
Well can you see the light thats behind me//
Coz when i lyrically murder you//
People will walk up and look at you//
Your on the floor, with no one to help you//
Your glad that i didnt kill and physically abuse you//
Now im done//
Now its your turn, lets see what you can DO..!//

[M Dogg™]

Better circle the wagons, the Indians about to raid
Shotting arrows that expode like granades
You like a doughnut, your a clear a glaze
Like a new recruit entering phrat, your gonna be hazed
For this might be the beginning of your days
But against the best, me your gonna have to praise
Bow down before me, the throne has been raised
Champions honor, you diss wasn't a faze
You see, I blow you out like candle light
And be knock you out like ESPN Fight Night
I'm Sugar Shane, well you De La Hoya, afriad to fight
I.E., were I'm on top of the Swap Meet, ready to snipe
Like you, call me Ike 'cause I'm lyrically abussive
I'll call you orange, 'cause I squeeze you just for juices
Beat you down, until there's nothing but bruises
And your sexual oriantion, have you confuse it
Kid this is the contest against one of the greats
A champion, I'm like Rick Fox, you like to hate
'Cause I come with that shit that set Ninjas straight
It's time to vote, our battle is what is fate

['Illicit']

hmm, well  first off,  tight battle.  
Cyborg:  it flowed, but it was simplistic, my advice to you is, practise more and try to insert some multis or metaphors. or jus think up some cool punches and combine em wit some sense and add more punches so you'll have 2 - 4 lines with skilled hardness.   jus keep on practising, maybe spice up your vocab though do one at a time.
you had cool lines, but like  i said   "lying on the floor dead" " tear you to shreds"     not bad, but simple.   and therefore not enough for M Dogg.   no offense aight? i was jus giving some advice.   god luck in the Rookie Tournament. rip shit up there.!

my vote:  M Dogg

peace

[Cyborg-Ninja]

Thanx for the advice Ceeride, i appreciate it man , oh and M-Dogg, your good, but at the moment i have just started out, so you'll probably beat me, but i thought that you personally kicked my ass lol Anyways, theres still only one vote so lets hope that there are more votes..!


Thanx for the tips Ceeride

Peace

[KVB1000]

I will have to agree with CeeRide here...
M Dogg gets my vote.

WC  Music

[Cyborg-Ninja]

Just one more vote, and 3 more votes left in the game for me.... C'mon who'll be the next voter...!

[Sub-Z]

ima have to agree wit ceeride

my vote:M-Dogg

[Cyborg-Ninja]

Oh Well, That was a good battle, and i think that i need to ripen up on my technique, but i thought that it was a clear battle, and the best emcee won the fight..! For NOW hehe


Peace!