Rate this shit for me...

[BL7]

 


it's ya nigga BL7 creating original lyrics all day and all night/
I'm like a criminal, lyrically killin' individuals on-site/
rippin' niggaz is intentional now/
mimic my style/
and you catchin' ten in ya brows/
if ya go against me, ya don't know what you're facin/
I'll send bullets to where all of my enemies are stationed/
gunning 'em down, one at a time/
clean the mess up then go send more bullets to where the rest are assigned/
that's what you get for tryna mess with my rhymes/
cuz BL7 is destined to shine/
if you challenge me, you're gonna learn your lesson and cry/
I love hip-hop/
nigga my shit's hot/
any haters step up/
many haters get shot/

['Illicit']

yo u and snapp should battle, u seem equal form the level of skillz.  i think that would be a tough battle.  id love to see it

hey u mind votin on my battle with tha7th?

peace

[Maestro Minded]

lol.. what u mean with "equal form the level of skillz" .. are they just too good

[BL7]

So what y'all think? Is it an improvement from my first rhyme?  

[TimeLock]

I like the section of it that I quoted. the brows shit had me laughing I like that. I also like where you are going with your flow u should add more to what I quoted and continue the ur story.

mimic my style/
and you catchin' ten in ya brows/
if ya go against me, ya don't know what you're facin/
I'll send bullets to where all of my enemies are stationed/
gunning 'em down, one at a time/
clean the mess up then go send more bullets to where the rest are assigned/
that's what you get for tryna mess with my rhymes/

peace

[BL7]

I like the section of it that I quoted. the brows shit had me laughing I like that. I also like where you are going with your flow u should add more to what I quoted and continue the ur story.


peace

I just added two more bars. I'm gonna drop another rhyme later. Too many people walkin' over me, don't want them seein' my shit.  

[BL7]

Aight, I'm back wit' another one...


If you insist to test me, shit gets messy/
you'll get your head disconnected, from your neck if you disrespect me/
and I'll blast any other niggaz gettin' misconceptions/
you can't advance over my game/
lyrically I attain, the skills to rip you over and over again/
gotta get better, never stayin' the same/
tight is the way that I shall always remain/
like I said before, I'll disconnect your head, grab it and re-attach it/
ain't seen nothin' this wild on national geographic!/
I'm still new, I ain't even spittin at my maximum/
if I did and I had a record deal, my shit would probably go platinum/
enemies nutt-up, but fall quick because I'm blastin' 'em/
people puzzled at why they came at me, but they dead, so ain't nobody askin' 'em/
if you wanna beat me, you better think of something rational/

[BL7]

Can y'all rate the second one too?

['Illicit']

sure we can, sorry i didnt see it right away.  

its  good, actually just as good and a tad bit better than the first one.


peace

[BL7]

I just wanted to spit this lil' short one I just thought up, and don't worry, this my last one...


BL7's the head nigga-in-charge/
any other niggaz' lyrics ain't even hittin'-this-hard/
put your brain in a state of emergency when I'm spittin'-these-bars/
don't ever come at me weak, cuz weak rhymes keep pissin'-me-off/

[AlerG]

deciding what rhymes-weak, multiply yours times-three/
fuck a style, i ain't quitten till your fucken lines-cease/
burn out your clutch, turn-out-your-rap/
only money you gettin is what you earn-on-ya-back/
paid for the three inch slit between-the-legs/
scream-and-slay, touchin me you'd better dream-and-pray/
i spell out the long story and tales of six-cities/
you sound pretty, coughing up cum and dick-spitting/

ah fuck it, i'm just clowning, nevermind me, peace.

[infinite59]

BL7Review:  Rhyme 1 Review: even up your bars a bit... improve your vocab a notch... use more metaphors... and most importantly keep spittin and blessin the board

Quotables:

I love hip-hop/
nigga my shit's hot/
any haters step up/
many haters get shot/

Played Out Rhymes:

that's what you get for tryna mess with my rhymes/

[infinite59]

Review of second rhyme:  Yo.. the second half of this rhyme was extremely tight.. I can see you are improving.. keep blessing the board homie