Essfive .::VS::. Timelock

[essfive]

here we go

first to 3 votes

-----------------timelock got lockpicked-------------------

timelock wanna get busy....try as hard as u can
when u rhyme ur like a fly fisher man...skimmin the top witout ever  gettin deep.. i gotta keep

the beef away from my street...ill do it by knockin you out no hassle...then ill strap u up hold

u down brand my name on ya like on cattle..essfive was here..he left his mark and then he moved

on..and when ur just a dot in my rear view mirra..dont feel down dont shed a tear..cos u got

beat by me..thats a legacy..so next time u wanna rap like a man on the moon..stuck on the same

plain without ever changin ya mood...ill be livin it up.. cut ya words down never lettin my

troubles cause a frown..keep ya ear to the ground..ya hear that noise..thats me

underground..never changing never hiding never failing my pride..so whats inside of essfive...a

bit of hate a bit of rhyme a bit of urban life..your a lobster in a pan you have a shrieking fit
ur a women repeller..u never seen a tit...except in movies..smokin stoogies wit ya friends ..oh

shit did i say friends i meant ur fuckin mother dawg....oh like its not like it depends on what

he said she said..or what u did too..ur just a drunken cowboy..wit 50 year old boots..a horse

called sampson.. a bottle of whiskey called jack d...a drunken washed out rapper ... u look like

a scruffy backpacker...so after this verbal assault dont strive..for a hospital where u can stay

alive...just remember who did it to ya..essfive

[TimeLock]

------------LOOK OUT WCC!!!-----------
it's essfive and his fruity crew of freinds "ass-five"/
to me there just a bunch of gays i like to call fruitafied/
cuz there lyrical style represents nothing but gay pride/
there furity, color aray of word play/
clrearly states that there gay/----lol

>:(look out "assfive"... i mean watch yah ass... /
cuz what yur dealin with here has no future or past/
and where i spit from there's no divison of class/
its where lyrical skill is made to everlast/
that why ur weak flowz can never surpast/
I easy crlt+alt+del and end ya task/
40 days and 40 night i put ya rhyme ta fast/
and like moes i roll with a kingly staff/
do u realy wanna taste the rath/
try and with ur last breath u'll gasp/
as i my flow swiftly R.I.P.s ur ass/
now ur life is set to past/
ripped so bad ur grave will grow no grass/
Why...grass can grow on bull-shit/
but ur rhyme not even worth it/
so to hell thine soul will goth/
and these eternal flows make sure this/

.:TimeLock:. AKA .:Son of Time:.

[TimeLock]

let the voting begin  

['Illicit']

timelock

[Doggystylin]

yo timelock took this one, hes not on your level essfive, you really gotta organize your rhymes, like timelock, while you took a lot of space and shit and you couldnt tell where the barz ended and a lot of unorganized shit goin on in your world, lol, so that really fucked it up for example

shit did i say friends i meant ur fuckin mother dawg....oh like its not like it depends on what  

he said she said..or what u did too..ur just a drunken cowboy..wit 50 year old boots..a horse  

called sampson.. a bottle of whiskey called jack d...a drunken washed out rapper ... u look like  

look at all the space you took up and didnt even show where your barz are and, that shits just really confusing, on how it rhymes and all........now look at timelocks

cuz what yur dealin with here has no future or past/
and where i spit from there's no divison of class/
its where lyrical skill is made to everlast/
that why ur weak flowz can never surpast/
I easy crlt+alt+del and end ya task/

see thats organzied and you can read that easy and it flows along, get your shit together dog


My Vote =TimeLock

[essfive]

IM BETTER NOW ..thanx for the advice..dont forget to visit the <a href="http://www.essfive.com/forum">Lyricists Station</a>

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

One point: Tha way u write yur rhymes in Keystyling grabs people's attention, If ur sloppy then a major point will be lost in people's eyes..........


TimeLocks verse flowed better IMO...........VOTE  = TimeLock

[Miss NWA Whoorider]

timelock.............