Author Topic: Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do Is...  (Read 259 times)

Doggystylin

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Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do Is...
« on: October 29, 2001, 04:03:46 PM »
Rate My Rhymes One By One, these are my rhymes that i have posted on here (WCC) in the lakst month or somethin like that Please Take Your Time And Do This, But If You Dont Have Time  Then......Get The Fuck Out ;D
     
Rate Them Outta 10 or 5, whatever u like

fuck with doggy the illstyle and get blasted
homie i get u fucked up like acid/
get ur ass raped up in plastic
the outcome of the oponent is drastic
spit any hotter the world would combust
so sick the fuckers look at me in disgust
u adjust ur brain i bo cause it aint even worth replyin
me and the this whole WCC nation know ull be dying, aint no deniyin, ill be suplyin
that dope sick sick shit ull be buyin/
and thats ripin u up in lil fractions
we need more action/
go get the lyrical weapons
to anyone else who thinks they can then step in
u dealin with the mastermind and im fuckin with your psych
maxi dont waste my time i got this fool shook up in fright
so wack that u belong in a wack waste site
cut necks/, rip guts/, popped eyes, is the result
i flex/, dope cuts/ openent dies, its his fault

     

oh now im up against the overrated sikotic
u cant drop dope shit even if you bought it
tryin to sneak ur way up but got spotted
ha, homie what? you tryin to compete
the only answer youll get is defeat
throw up that flag cause i know youll retreat
im leavin the mess of lyrical bloody ground
peeps comin up with ears and dicks of others they found
from my shit here you can tell my sick sick sound
sikotic for ur own good, for ur own carrer
homie dont step into this right here,
down the face comes a tear
from bein filled with fear
maxi i thought i told u give me real competition
anniahlatin suckas like sikotic is my tradition
another addition
to the list of the bitches i wrecked
and im not even in full affect
its me Doggy,and i declare this my win
only other person to beat me would have to be my twin/
for me to lose, it would be the greatest sin
Sikotic got knocked the fuck down like that wall in berlin
look to the left and ull see im the fuckin regulator
the creator/
of any dope shit u hear , LATER/

sicker than that infamous hijacked plane
sikotic is stuck forever in the wack lane
leave you pale whiter than cocaine
i would say ur history, but what the fuck have u done
hey yo everybody how much talent is ther in siko, NONE!
u aint gettin nowhere but down in the depths of hell
where ther are big fags waitin for your ass thats where you will dwell
but for u thats like heaven,
big fags, fuckin you in the ass 24/7
how many more bodies should i stack, i got more than hitler
when they say sikotic ill claim, i killt-her
yes im evil disgusting, put on the adult filter
dont even start about the soul
im in here im in controll
i got the mufuckin devil in on my finger tip
satan sayin "dog please this time let it slip"
cut your heads off one by one like cuttin cattle heads off
tryin to be hard but your hardness is like a 90 year old dick , soft
dun know yet lemme tell you im sicker than a dog with rabies
feel no pain no remorse eatin on the brains of incocent babies
fuckin on as i told you doggystylin stricly ladies
yeah i do it , there is no maybies
lyrically murder you, furious with flames spittin
hard hittin
while you sittin
reading my dopeness , like oh shit, im right behind you about to be splittin
your head and if i didnt tell you your hopeless
primo, 7th, alerg , infinite ill take on yall anytime
cause sikotic is done got finished on this muthafuckin line!

i aint part of csn but ima still spit
you wacker than wack while im sicker than sick
stackin mah stack while you eatin my dick
youz a sucka well its sucka killin season
lyrically anhialate your click fo no reason
bitches i got the scope/staight aimed at ya throat
click click, there goes up the gunsmoke
blood soak/
international sick dope rapper
sicker than cut throat kidnapper
when you bitches rhyme all you hear is laughter
that was gayer than elton john with eminem
lyrically execute you with the res of em
bringin more terror than terrorrism
when i hit, i never missem
my nuts, you faggots kissem
interfere with my lyrical flames
you get called out like names
playin you like fuckin games


my lyrics stomp on u from above like godzilla/
spitten rhymez like bullets from a 9 milla/
im comen n rippen up human meat/
lil bitches shut da fuck up n take yo seat/
its time u learnt a lesson from da strong coz ur rapz so fucken weak/
when i step in da ring u wanna submitt defeat/
cause i assassinate all who wanna fuck with it/
got mah pants hangen n a gat tucked within it/
cause my mind state is fucken faded/
rippen ur flesh n guts just like i stated/
BITCH, u thought i was gone but i just fucken made it/

me the homie maxi and my dogg black
tearin yall up on the first freestyle attack
wack shits like you get sent back
as my dogs teeth grab a grip of ya head
homie just consider yourself dead
blood and flesh/ comin out fresh
out of the mind/, this is a sign
to stay the fuck out of our way
if not yur body will decay, we dont play
shit, you bitches just wont stop
wait for me to rock
the world, like MJ
yo maxi wheres hates, now let him play
a lot of you shits on this board are overrated
wack shit like yours deserves to be hated
dope rappin has just been created
how can we be so tight and not related

RATE 'EM      NOW!    PLEASE!
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Tecknine

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Re: Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do I
« Reply #1 on: October 29, 2001, 04:43:10 PM »
0\10 every single one.....Nah man i'm just playing...I just wanted to post...But i'll read um tomorrow and rate um
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infinite59

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Re: Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do I
« Reply #2 on: October 29, 2001, 05:01:40 PM »
Out of 5.... I was being real critical

1rst verse-  1.5
2nd verse-  1.5
3rd verse- 4
4th verse- 4
5th verse- 3
6th verse- 1.5
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Doggystylin

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Re: Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do I
« Reply #3 on: October 29, 2001, 05:04:17 PM »
aight thanx, atleast you reviewd it

and pr1mo, hurry up!, lol
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Re: Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do I
« Reply #4 on: October 29, 2001, 05:51:01 PM »
overall about a 3/10, peace.
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Re: Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do I
« Reply #5 on: October 29, 2001, 06:03:21 PM »
2 outta 5 fo dem all
peace
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Re: Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do I
« Reply #6 on: October 29, 2001, 06:40:43 PM »
All 2, WTF?.......Man At least most of his rhymes waz creative and wasnt all about murdering tha other person lyrically un like some people.........Sheeet.........


Here's my ratings...........

1st - 2.9/5  (Aiight, Couldve been wayy better)

2nd - 3.1/5  (I like this, Not bad, lil more than 3)

3rd - 4.6/5  (Most Creative, lil more than 4.5)

4th - 4.4/5  (Excellent effort, lil less than 4.5 though)

5th - 3/5  (Good Effort)

6th - 2/5  (It waz aiight, but I couldnt flow and stay wit it)
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Re: Aight Yall , Help Me Out, All You HAve To Do I
« Reply #7 on: October 29, 2001, 07:20:19 PM »
overall he spat sum 3.5 n sum 3
but then he spat sum shit i didn like
so all up 2
n most of dem r battlez.. n u gotta talk bout killen ppl lyrically
lolz
so ima take that as a compliment..
peace
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