Author Topic: my first time... (Read 185 times)

Ro J. Simpson · « **on:** July 16, 2001, 01:50:39 PM »

bump this shit in your new car system
The pinnacle of sinister the cynical wisdom
My strategy, split em, seemingly hitting em
with little eenie meenie bits of flattery
That'll stagger em for a minute, imagine I'm draggin em in it
The mud, dont forget, rememeber, I'm braggin infinite
This Menace here II finish off Society
Not Dennis, the nemesis of a different variety
The gap-toothed kid with the ill computer flow (uhh)
The Most Beautifullest Thing, so suitable

maxi-padz · « **Reply #1 on:** July 16, 2001, 10:06:05 PM »

daz tight as fuck for a post rhyme nig
keep busten n u will be 100 timez better but
that was sum tigth shytz
peace
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Doggystylin · « **Reply #2 on:** July 28, 2001, 04:06:47 AM »

here is my first rhyme here too

ima drop a rhyme/
ahead of your time/
if you dont like this shit, fine/
turn the set up/
i wont give up/
burn ya head up/
my flow my style/
first seen in tha keystyle/
who am i ?, check my profile/
6 in tha mornin havin nothin to do/
that why i came in here to write a rhyme or two/
and of course im from the West and we got the
blue/
so now you should know where im from and whos my crew/
now im here and on the mike/
and i came her to roc this site/
from the lef to the right/

alright guys im outt, its six in the mornin and im writin bullshit, i better get outta her asap before i embarres myself anymore

Doggystylin · « **Reply #3 on:** July 28, 2001, 05:08:50 PM »

comon yall tell me what you think

maxi-padz · « **Reply #4 on:** July 28, 2001, 05:16:39 PM »

it was ight for a first rhyme
nuttin special
peace
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Doggystylin · « **Reply #5 on:** July 28, 2001, 05:33:04 PM »

yeah now that i read it again, i see that i need to spend some time on my rhymin,

.:N-Imy:. · « **Reply #6 on:** July 29, 2001, 04:02:56 AM »

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bump this shit in your new car system
The pinnacle of sinister the cynical wisdom
My strategy, split em, seemingly hitting em
with little eenie meenie bits of flattery
That'll stagger em for a minute, imagine I'm draggin em in it
The mud, dont forget, rememeber, I'm braggin infinite
This Menace here II finish off Society
Not Dennis, the nemesis of a different variety
The gap-toothed kid with the ill computer flow (uhh)
The Most Beautifullest Thing, so suitable

I know we gots our differences but forgeting that, that was some very tight stuff you done there.