Summin' I Found Lyin' Around

[.:N-Imy:.]

As the title says this is one of my first raps I ever did when I had the dream of being famous. This was dome when I was about turning 14 1/4 so I know it may be a bit wack but hey I was a kid dreaming of some fantasy and so I made this rap. I just want some feedback on what ya'll think of this. As you will notice there is the ABC rhyme to it and it is very use-ive of the small words that rhyme. Here goes:


Spoken:

This be to all tha reporters and journalist who be watchin' every move I make.
Always followin' me. Never leavin' me alone to live a life. You know who you are.
Yeah this be summin' else for you to write 'bout and criticise. Think I give a fuck. Hahahahahahaha.
Ya'll dumber than I thought.


Verse 1:

God damn, fuck
Why people claiming it's luck
On every single buck
That I make
And brake
And I don't linger
I just give 'em tha finger
I give it to 'em straight
And if they hate
I just laugh and think it's funny
Cause who tha one making all tha money ?
I can no longer flirt
Cause if I do they spread dirt
About me in tha papers
They all up to capers
Thinkin' they know my hood
But they just up to no good
Tha priests are molesting
But I always be the one they contesting
Like I am one big infection
Got my guards for protection
Just cause I make all tha cream
They just seem
To point tha finger at me
Tryin' to ruin my credibilitee
They be zealous
Cause they jealous
They just all yellow
Each and every one of them fellow
They never say anything to my face
Cause I bring 'em to thier knee's as if they tie-ing their lace
If not in the papers then on T.V
But that's the way tings gotta be
Not wit me
You come near my door I'm gonna shoot
Steal all your loot
Sell it back at a high price
Catch ya and stick youse head in my vice
Pullin' tighter and tighter until you scream and shout
Vains gettin' bigga, oops, your brain just popped out
All over my floor you mothasucker
No wait, ya muthafucker
Wots tha matter, don't like tha way I talk
Then just walk
And don't stalk
Watchin' every move
Movin' camera's so fast, you gettin' on your groove


Chorus:

Followin' every move that I make
Watchin' every buck that I brake
Can't you leave me to live my life
Go home to you bitchin' wife
I ain't going soft, you piss me off I will shoot at you
Yeah you and you reporting crew


Verse 2:

Wot's tha matter, don't like my style
Well leave me alonf a while
And I won't have to attack ya
Smack ya
In tha face
And on T.V make you a disgrace
When I announce
You pronounce
And off the wall you bounce
Cause on me you always depend
And if I'm not there wit your boss tryin to make amend
Maybe I should go away and cost ya'll your wages
Cause this could go on for ages
Hell wot am I talkin' about
If I ain't in then I'm out
I hate this nation
They always got me on probation
Wot for, nothing
Cause I told sumbody they insulting
Hell that ain't no crime
So I have to say it in my rhyme
They just all after my money
Over my head it's a cloudy not sunny
Wit my gun going on a mazy
Got me going crazy
Tryin' to take advantage
Tryin' to do sum damage
But when I ignite
I always be dynamite
I am very deadly
Come and let me add you to my meadly
You punk ass bitches
You just anotha one who wanna be in stitches
Don't try to pretend
When you try to defend
Yourself for wot youse done
Thinkin' that it all fun
I'm gonna demolich ya
And abolish ya
Sittin' back in my crib smokin' dope
Just prayin' for a little bit of hope


Chorus:

Followin' every move that I make
Watchin' every buck that I brake
Can't you leave me to live my life
Go home to you bitchin' wife
I ain't going soft, you piss me off I will shoot at you
Yeah you and you reporting crew


Verse 3:

All this drama
Be upsettin' my mama
Is it cause I am white
So you think I'm shite
I'm not from tha east or west coast
So I don't boast
But I'm gettin' tired of this shit
Be tearin' you up bit by bit
Leave you cut up body in a black bag
Like an' ol' person you sag
Now I got you quivering
Behind tha couch shiverin'
Come out, Come out where-ever you are
I ain't gonna run you over wit my car
No need to be flary
I know I'm scary
You don't need to tell me
I be wot I be
I can't help that
But you bring your bat
I'll bring my gat
Like Maradonna I'll shoot at free will
Claimin' I ain't got tha skill
People please
I'm makin all tha cheese
I ain't tha one rakin' bins for food
Cause my life, it all good
Settin' you own track
Hahahaha, you better watch your back
I'll clock ya
And glock ya
When I blast
You be runnin' fast / Tryin' to dive back into your cast
Are you blind
Or do you just need to find
Your specs
Those Gregory pecs
I am completed
You still depleted ?
Not got anotha story
Ah well, it all be about hope and glory


Spoken:

Wot's tha matter. Ain't you had enough yet. Hahahahahahaha. You still wanna chase after me.
God damn. I thought you would have stopped by now. Ok the. So you wanna pay tha
consequences. Well when you in your death bed, don't be blamin' me cause you dead. I can't
help wot my finga's wanna do. Well maybe after this you will leave me alone but I guess that's
just part of life. T.V, papers, radio. You name it. I have, am and always will be on them. Even when
I'm dead they be refering to my name for summin'. Good, bad. Hell I dunno. They do wot they wanna
do but like I always say. Don't always believe wot you read. If summin' in tha paper about me and it ain't
true you'll know about it cause it be in one of my raps. If it is true then wot can I do. Everybody do bad
thangs. If not, wot would the world be like? Hahahahahahaha. Peace out to everybody who help make my
dream come true and to all my fanz. I hope I will always have a place in your heart, cause you will always
have a place in mine.I don't need to swear to be heard. I don't need big words to be heard. Tupac rest in peace.
Everybody out there rest in peace Peace out people. Peace out.


As you will notice I have added the speaking bits just to show how dreamy I was. Anywayz laugh or whateva at this so-called master-piece cause like I said it was one of my first so criticise or whateva you wanna do with it cause I ain't bothered.