"Mr Gruesome"...rate this from 1-10

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Everyone, here's a rhyme I did in 3 mins...I just want everyone to rate this from 1-10...I know I'm capable of more, but i want somone to rate my efortless rhymes...


This ain’t no illusion/My Rhymes expand, like infusion/There’s no solution/ I continue cruisin’/Through MC’s, leave them bruisin’/There’s no way that I’m loosin’/The resolution/is revolution/Rhymes that cause confusion/Introducin/Mr. Gruesome/I know I’m mental/but ya’ll still get beat like insturmental/My rhymes erase your rhymes like a muthafuckin’ pencil/Keep you stored in my utensil/Use you out, like a rental/Ya rhymes are cheap like a Pento/My rhymes are first class like a Benzo/I dare anyone to try to tongue twist this/Bitch, shut the fuck up! Just like Limp Bizkit/Ya rhymes are simplistic/And mine burn yours like steaming liquid/How you gunna try steppin up to somone gifted?/Ya rhymes are ugly enough to get face-lifted...

[So Much Style]

8.

it was some of your best, but all rhymes have been used before but it was really good

[TheSheriff]

6-8.

Good, but I felt the rhyme pattern was a bit annoying.

[Top-Dogg2001]

7 I thought it was hot but after a while it started to go down. I agree with the sherriff about the rhyme pattern. I think you should have changed it up a bit.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

I said it was 3 min rhyme? What can i change in 3 mins?

[Tanjential]

that was tight (i give it 7) but since it was the same rhyme pattern it gets anooying,you gotta switch up more...peace-Tanjint