makavelithedon vs. Gareefa

[da_notorious_mack]

yo ill vote if agreed by both of yall,u both ma homies so u know imma b real

[Kill]

Yo sup mack, it's cool with me, vote plz

[da_notorious_mack]

aiight,but could yall check the fuck mack cypher tell me if i still aiight at spitting,recent shit knocked my confidence

[Reef]

Yeah man.. vote

[da_notorious_mack]

Vote=Makavelithadon

Imm Explain This Vote

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Gareefa

i break ya neck neck: Gareefa Rippin-the-mic/
you betta hit the deck deck cause im rippin-this-dyke/

I Werent really feelin ya repeatin the word,it jus didnt seem ta fit with a battle verse,dont worry it gets better


and you abide by my rules and regulations/
cause you aint a student no more and you'll never exceed expectations/
your an imprudent little whore cause you dont show no patience/
*you aint in a classroom now/and mack cant bail you out/
thinkin your gonna prevail, even mack got doubt/*


Now this bit here was the best part of ya verse ,nice personals,i liked this a lot

fav lines=*

and crash into a brick wall/and i dont know what you think im sick for/
i got just one question.. What the fuck do u suck **** dick for?/


nice finish,but damn homie which 1 of us u battling?na j/p nice ending,again a nice personal diss


this wasnt 1 of ya best spits but it was still very good i feel the start let u down a bit,apart from that ya ryme was pretty dope

4.2/5

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Makavelthadon


Yo, ~mak~ ready to ~do shit~, ~wack acts~ ~"executed"~ in a ~"row"~//  
the ~flow~ of my ~raps~ get ya ~"electrocuted"~//

This was an average start,with your opening too bars u need to really impress,it makes ppl wanna read more,but still aiight start


~trip on~ copycats, ~hoe~ YOU prolly "bite" like ~"piranhas"~ and still couldn't ~"flow"~ on the ~"Amazonas"~//  
*Ga"reefa" ain't ~"dope"~ with an ounce of ~"marihuana"~//  
I ~"spit"~ like a ~"llama"~ and ~"stick"~ ya like Jigga's ~dick~ into ~Carmen~// *  
I'm ~steadily innovative~, you better give ~credit to me~ ~instead of hatin~//  


this bit was dope,you used ya knowledge of hip hop(summat i know u have a lot of,only problem is that usin a pun about a commercial artist can become played quick,better off doin punches bout underground rappers,it makes the punch sound more intelligent


I can still wound ya~, ~explicit and equipped~, ya already got ~hit "AND" kicked~ by ya ~"Indecisive" bitch~//

Gareefa i know that hurt!dope personal,nice way to end the ryme


Nice ryme,id usually say a tie but imma havta judge it by the starts,yall pretty equal on every other part of tha ryme,so i havta give it to makaveli!

hope yuall have a rematch,i really enjoyed ya battle

[Kill]

Thanks for the feedback and the advice mack

makavelithedon 2 - 0 Gareefa

KEEP THE VOTES CUMIN, 2 MORE COULD BE ENUFF  

[Kill]

Damn...

GAREEFA:

It seems like we really ain't gettin no votes. And the topic's already got 20 replies on 2 pages. There are sum things we could do:

- I just win (I can understand if u don't agree with that, I still need 2 more votes)

- We wait and wait and wait...

- We start a new topic

- We set a time limit (like the one who's got more votes on 08/28/02, 5:00 pm wins)

WHAT U THINK

[Gay-o Felony]

lol... anyways.. i tried that with Gareefa before in our "Lightweight Title" match... harmany had the title, but he didnt post on time, so he said that one of us could ave it, and seeing as we had already our verses up and posted.. we decided to fight for it.. i think at the time i was winning.. (have to check) lol.. and i said that seeing as harmany wasnt in the battle no more, and considering it was only me and harmany in the first place, if i could have the title.... but no we had to battle it out coz he said no.... and i got it coz he forfitted... so i dont think he will agree with you "Winning" i think he will either let it carry on with tha votes... or start another battle...


Theres my advice... lol

Peace -- Indecisive, checkin out....! from WCC!

[Kill]

Neither it's fair to say I just win nor it is to start another battle with the two votes I did already get here not meanin shit, so I really suggest settin a time limit, I know that's unusual but it's fair IMO. Gareefa where tha fuck u at ? I'ma let u set it if u agree

[Reef]

U win.. I give ya a title shot or somethin when i aint got other shit happenin'.. That'll be within the nect week.. u cool with that

[Kill]

So I got this ? Well, I'm surely cool with that if u want a rematch I'll definitely accept. Peace

[Reef]

check ur PM's