makavelithedon vs. Gareefa

[Kill]

That's rite I'm callin you out, I think it's about time I fuckin battled on here, but I'm rather new to battlin (this gonna be my 3rd battle verse ever) so if u accept the rules are:

> No bar limit
> First to 4 votes (no K.O.)
> No crew votes (since I haven't got a crew..)
> All votes need explanation
> U spit first
> No beef...

[Reef]

Ayo. Sorry aboutt he delay.. I slept out last nite and didnt get on the net. Im hittin back.. I accept.. and i'll spit by Monday Midnight (GMT) At the latest..

peace

[Kill]

Aiight cool. I only want u to spit first cuz I'm new to this and I wanna see ya verse first, mine's more or less finished though. I got nuthin to lose anyways cause I never battled here. But if I got that right I'd be the lightweight title holder if I beat ya (correct me if I'm wrong, though I don't really think it's gunna happen..)

[Reef]

Ima key this shit right now..




i break ya neck neck: Gareefa Rippin-the-mic/
you betta hit the deck deck cause im rippin-this-dyke/
im exploding onto the rap stage, but im strapped with a gauge/
and im not afraid to use it/this fucker is a dog/
and his owner pays me to abuse it/you maybe used to it/
but muthafucker i refuse to quit/i'll be reppin the outlawz till i die/
refuse to tell you why cause you cant ruin my pride/
jumpin over this cat, take a long stride/
and you abide by my rules and regulations/
cause you aint a student no more and you'll never exceed expectations/
your an imprudent little whore cause you dont show no patience/
you aint in a classroom now/and mack cant bail you out/
thinkin your gonna prevail, even mack got doubt/
couldnt have picked a worse first-battle/
i un-do the nuts on your car, and i watch the hearse rattle/
and crash into a brick wall/and i dont know what you think im sick for/
i got just one question.. What the fuck do u suck macks dick for?/

[Kill]

Well sorry this time I was delayed. Anyways, here's my shit

Yo, ~mak~ ready to ~do shit~, ~wack acts~ ~"executed"~ in a ~"row"~//  
the ~flow~ of my ~raps~ get ya ~"electrocuted"~//  
my lyrics are ~strap-influenced~, I'm like ~gats disputin~//  
~attack the shit that you spewin~, it leaves me ~intact and I'ma prove it~//  
I ~"nitrate" ya~ to "blow up", ~desecrate ya~, the ~impact'll~ ~devastate ya~, ~in fact~ my shit is ~major~//  
vindictiveness might ~persuade ya~ to ~elongate ya~ raps, but I'll just ~play ya~//  
muthafucka, don't ~drop shit~, it'd ~stop in~ a ~coffin~, ~"locked up"~ like ~"fucked topics"~//  
I "jump at ya" ~hip-"hoppin"~, soon you just another ~stiff up in~//  
the ~autopsy~, even "practicin ~sodomy"~ you ~didn't stop~~"dick-suckin"~//  
~trip on~ copycats, ~hoe~ YOU prolly "bite" like ~"piranhas"~ and still couldn't ~"flow"~ on the ~"Amazonas"~//  
Ga"reefa" ain't ~"dope"~ with an ounce of ~"marihuana"~//  
I ~"spit"~ like a ~"llama"~ and ~"stick"~ ya like Jigga's ~dick~ into ~Carmen~//  
I'm ~steadily innovative~, you better give ~credit to me~ ~instead of hatin~//
look it's ~better to see~ a ~submissive~ ~crew than~ ~you and~ 6 bizzles ~layin~ cause they ~resisted~//
my rhymes are like ~missiles~, I "stand tall" but even with ~"six" "pistols"~ y'all ~bitches~ still wouldn't reach ~"nickel"~//
~"compute" !~, it's easy, ya "head's" a ~"lap-top"~ cause ya do so much ~"dick-suckin" fool//
get a whole ~clip up in you~, compared to me ~Kid Rock is smooth~, ya fuckin ~lips are too loose~//
I ~stick-up ya crew~, combine ~hiphop and Lugers~, like "neutrinos" my ~shit goes straight "thru ya"~//
~lyrics "sick" like a "flu"~, got an ~itch for just shootin~ a punk, it's so easy to ~rip mics and do ya~//
~I can still wound ya~, ~explicit and equipped~, ya already got ~hit "AND" kicked~ by ya ~"Indecisive" bitch~//

[Kill]

Vote now y'all

[Reef]

uppin.. Vote..

[Big Verb]

YO,4 REAL,NEITHER OF YA,ARE DOPE,BUT THE PAC NUT RIDER TOOK THIS,EITHER OF YA FOSIWOLE'S WANNA BATTLE,CHECK KEYSTYLE

[Kill]

Who's the "Pac nutrider" ? Goin by names it's me, goin by signatures it's Gareefa. Though u a newbie with a big ass mouth I'd count ya vote if u explained it and made clear who won ("VOTE = makavelithedon/Gareefa")

1-0 anybody but the vote don't count like this, so it's still 0-0

[Reef]

Who's the "Pac nutrider" ? Goin by names it's me, goin by signatures it's Gareefa. Though u a newbie with a big ass mouth I'd count ya vote if u explained it and made clear who won ("VOTE = makavelithedon/Gareefa")

1-0 anybody but the vote don't count like this, so it's still 0-0

[Gay-o Felony]

Well this is close.... mmmmmmm..

Gareefa:

I thought you had a nice verse, thought the punchlines were hitting, and takin effect. I liked this line:

couldnt have picked a worse first-battle/
i un-do the nuts on your car, and i watch the hearse rattle/

thought it was tight... i would give it outta 5:

4.5

Makavelithedon:

I liked your verse, thought it had some dope lines, liked the multi's but i didnt rate the layout that much, no real need for the ~ all the time.. I liked these lines:

Ga"reefa" ain't ~"dope"~ with an ounce of ~"marihuana"~//  

and this one:

I ~"nitrate" ya~ to "blow up", ~desecrate ya~, the ~impact'll~ ~devastate ya~, ~in fact~ my shit is ~major~//  
vindictiveness might ~persuade ya~ to ~elongate ya~ raps, but I'll just ~play ya~//  

i would give you outta 5: 4.7

i think Makaveli takes this vote....

and what ya actually mean by:

~I can still wound ya~, ~explicit and equipped~, ya already got ~hit "AND" kicked~ by ya ~"Indecisive" bitch~//  ?


Indy -- ELITE

[Kill]

Well this is close.... mmmmmmm..

Makavelithedon:

I liked your verse, thought it had some dope lines, liked the multi's but i didnt rate the layout that much, no real need for the ~ all the time.. I liked these lines:

Ga"reefa" ain't ~"dope"~ with an ounce of ~"marihuana"~//  

and this one:

I ~"nitrate" ya~ to "blow up", ~desecrate ya~, the ~impact'll~ ~devastate ya~, ~in fact~ my shit is ~major~//  
vindictiveness might ~persuade ya~ to ~elongate ya~ raps, but I'll just ~play ya~//  

i would give you outta 5: 4.7

i think Makaveli takes this vote....

Thanx for the feedback homie  . Correct me if I'm wrong, but a victory would give me the lightweight title since Gareefa's (yet) holdin it (?)

and what ya actually mean by:

~I can still wound ya~, ~explicit and equipped~, ya already got ~hit "AND" kicked~ by ya ~"Indecisive" bitch~//  ?


Indy -- ELITE

Lol, don't take no offence to that, Mack just told me u and Gareefa knew each other in real life so I just thought I had to put that in...no offence though, really, it's just a battle. He called me a mack-dickridah, I don't even know how he can know I'm down with Mack (?)

Well, anyways
1-0 makaveli

MORE VOTES WOULD BE VERY APPRECIATED

[Gay-o Felony]

No, you wont get the "Lightweight Title" coz if Gareefa was defendin the title he woulda had a match with "Lightweight Title Match" next to it. so i dont think so, but you will ave to ask him homie!

Peace --


NEED VOTES ON ME VS VERBALKENT!

Indy

[Kill]

Hmm ok cool whether I win or not life will go on without that title I'm just wonderin cause the way I interpreted it a victory over the lightweight title holder means gettin that title like he did when he battled u but whatever, if I win this I'ma be happy with havin won and if not fuck it, I'm quite new to battlin.I'ma vote on ur battle, I'm rite now experiencin how it is when ure waitin for votes and don't fuckin get any peace

[Reef]

Hmm ok cool whether I win or not life will go on without that title I'm just wonderin cause the way I interpreted it a victory over the lightweight title holder means gettin that title like he did when he battled u but whatever, if I win this I'ma be happy with havin won and if not fuck it, I'm quite new to battlin.I'ma vote on ur battle, I'm rite now experiencin how it is when ure waitin for votes and don't fuckin get any peace

Man it looks like at the moment we aint gonna get no love on this battle.... I mean.. It aint an actual lightweight title match, but if we get no more votes within the next cople of days (or u win this) im quite happy to give u a shot.. u cool with that?