Author Topic: .:R-E-L:. vs. Killuminati... Middleweight Title Match (Read 530 times)

Kill · « **on:** October 18, 2002, 03:39:49 AM »

Ok, as I said drop as soon as u want

RULES:
> First to 5 votes (3-0 = KO)
> Only persons with more than 100 posts are allowed to vote
> Those persons must post on these boards regularly
> Bar limit 15 max
> U drop 1st as challenger

.:R-E-L:. · « **Reply #1 on:** October 18, 2002, 07:05:19 PM »

o shit....im bak everybody, lol

haha

.:R-E-L:. · « **Reply #2 on:** October 18, 2002, 07:16:28 PM »

You cant even see me, cuz Im quiker than Bruce Lee//
Rest in Peace, yes, you've reached that degree//
Crashing your anatomy, Ill bury u happily//
Gotta agree, you cant even master me//
Luckily, for me, its all gravy...plus u crazy//

+++++++++++++

Get Ready...Im about to slim your lyrikal fat wit my rhyming liposuction//
Exploding worse than a spontaneous combustion eaten at a luncheon//
You've sucked since then, cuz I got better diction than a Literature Junction//
You cant even function and you're worse than itch, irritation//
Lyrikal annihilation is my gas sprayed wit madd radiation//
You the president causing me to create a massive assasination//
You cant even get saved from the Emancipation Proclamation//
And for your information, my rhymes are my own creation//
Not biten or chasen, for other's aggrevation//
And not picked up at every other station//

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FuCk.....Im outta "shape", lol

I gotta add another rule...its a MUST...we need detailed voting!!!!

No detailed vote..the vote doesnt count!!

Now_Im_Not_Banned · « **Reply #3 on:** October 19, 2002, 08:42:40 PM »

Good shit R-E-L...You're improving...Keep listening to your rap CDs and you'll improve even more...PeACe

Kill · « **Reply #4 on:** October 24, 2002, 02:18:33 PM »

LIL INTRO:
effervescent expressions infectin affection, you ain't passin the test of this lesson detectin perfection//
I'm dissectin ya message, wreckin this session, you embarassed like homosexuals in front of hoes expectin erection//
battlin ? I'm suggestin neglection, this is continuation dissuasion, hatefully rapin you ain't takin no patience//
degradin invasion of phrases changin behavior cuz you were blatantly crazed, run the day's come, you'll now be facin disgrace son//

...battle the mothafucka down....

whenever ~writin~ I ~rip mics, leave a mark in ya~, R.E.L. couldn't bring "cool punches" ~bitin~ ~"fistfights in Antarctica"~//
like when you "drunk" after ~sick night's I'm leavin "bars" in ya~, ~scarrin ya~, stop the ~bitch lines, they just harmin ya~//
your only "fan" is ~"spinnin on the ceiling"~, I'm ~winnin and revealin~ that you ~really ain't appealing~//
I'm ~killin when defeatin~, far from ~finished when you leavin~ battlin me is worse than ~stealin shit in Eden~//
punches so ~complex~, tryina ~decipher you look wack~ your shit ain't got no ~context~, you just a ~triflin shook twat~//
I ~snipe you like hood cats~ you need "AID(S)" cause if you get "burnt" you ~might be a good "match"~//
~cook "crack(s)"~, still it's fuckin easy to "rip" you, dirtier than ~slum rats~ you ~dumb wack~, now you ~done trapped~//
I "smoke" you ~numb "fag"~ my only kind of "applause" is ~"gun clap"~, bitch you comin with ~"punk" rap~ ?// {{1}}
that's a ~diss to yaself~, these ~missiles ain't held~, "bitch" don't try to "fuck" with my "dawgs", we'd ~diss ya to hell~//
the ~vicious prevails~ you're stuck cause ~piss can't excell~ I'm spittin "heat" that's gettin ~sissies to "melt"~//

{{1}}: In his signature it says "R.E.L. comin with that punk rap"

Reef · « **Reply #5 on:** October 24, 2002, 02:31:21 PM »

Ok heres the breakdown.

R.E.L

Tight verse man, your improving alot, all i can say is keep spittin like that. It was a good verse, your vocab was pretty ill, apart from in the intro and the rhyme scheme could be improved a little, i got nothing against the old skool style.. But switchin some shit up sometimes would be dope. Your flow was good, the simple rhyme structure helped it flow. There wasn't very many direct disses toward Killuminati, i thought u coulda played on his name and maybe brought the pac dickrider lines in there lol. I think at the end of it all thats what lets your rhyme down, no personal disses in there.

Best Line(s):
Exploding worse than a spontaneous combustion eaten at a luncheon//
You've sucked since then, cuz I got better diction than a Literature Junction//

Killuminati

You had a dope verse homie. Your vocab was sick, and that little intro flowed and rhyme real nicely, didnt make much sense but the flow made up for that. The actual main rhyme you wrote didnt flow properly to me, but the rhymes were real dope and the punchlines in the whole verse were tight. Your wordplay was cool too, disses seemed to hit harder than R.E.L's verse.

Best Line(s):
I'm dissectin ya message, wreckin this session, you embarassed like homosexuals in front of hoes expectin erection//

Overall this was a good battle. But the winner for me has to be Killuminati.. Good battle once again.

Peace.

Now_Im_Not_Banned · « **Reply #6 on:** October 24, 2002, 08:54:34 PM »

K i l l u m i n a t i had some dope ass multis and punches...But what I didn't like is that his bars were too long...If u tried to flow that shit over a beat, it wouldn't flow right...U (and most of the keystylers today) have to shorten your bars...Also, I didn't see too many big words in there...Most words were Elementry level words...The fact that u have dope multis doesn't mean shit when u use small words...But, it still is a dope rhyme overall...

REL's rhyme was on a higher vocabulary level, and flowed better, with shorter bars...However, ure punches and multis need to be improved...None-The-Less...My vote goes to R-E-L...PeACe

Kill · « **Reply #7 on:** October 25, 2002, 08:53:53 AM »

Aight 1-1...I think the intro's vocab was aight but yeah the rest of the verse wasn't based on high vocab but on pun(che)s...whutever...more votes

Kill · « **Reply #8 on:** October 25, 2002, 08:55:56 AM »

and as for the bars...many people don't seem to be able to flow my shit like this so I'll change that even though it flows greatly to me, finally it all depends on whut it's like for others

da_notorious_mack · « **Reply #9 on:** October 25, 2002, 11:05:57 AM »

rel ya have improved a lot but killuminati took this,i managed ta catch how it flowed,it quite simple,he had better punches and multis as well,rel ya were lackin personals

Kill · « **Reply #10 on:** October 25, 2002, 11:09:15 AM »

2-1 thanx 4 the vote...up

Kill · « **Reply #11 on:** October 26, 2002, 07:14:56 PM »

UP VOTES NEEDED

Pillow · « **Reply #12 on:** October 27, 2002, 12:53:51 AM »

nice battle yall, very close actually. i thought REL would have no chance b4 i opend this thread cause i thought he stopped rappin cause he was a so called "EMO" or whtever lol but he almost won this shit. high vobab and nice flow yo, but killum took this battle, nice ass punches, i was feelin that shit. vote=Killuminati

Fatal619 · « **Reply #13 on:** October 27, 2002, 02:56:12 AM »

Killuminati came better on this tha metaz punches and all took this Rel u was good but u gotta come a bit better next time playa.

one.

Kill · « **Reply #14 on:** October 27, 2002, 04:12:34 AM »

Tinman, thanx for the vote

Fatal, thanx for the feedback though I can't count ur vote since u ain't got 100 posts yet...that's the rules to this battle, sorry but thanx anyways

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