Author Topic: "Evolutionary"/ New Track I'm Working On Writing... "Lucid Dreaming"  (Read 355 times)

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CHORUS:

I'm Lucid Dreaming
Into a Waking Life
Inducin a Nightmare
When I go sleep at night
Hypnotize myself
As I scream for help
Take control of my dream
becoming something else
I'm Lucid Dreaming
Into a Waking Life
Inducin a Nightmare
When I go sleep at night
Hypnotize myself
As I scream for help
Take control of my dream
becoming something else

Verse 1:

Hypnotize these eyes,
with rhymes comprised
of what my soul cries
Inducin meditation
in  the inner mind,
till thought becomes
straight and streamlined
I can see it crystalize
so I watch it
as it metamorphosized
on into a nightmare
Anything possible
where your dream is here,  
but did you notice this?
That you can't
turn on and off a light switch?
So now I'm lucid dreaming,
controlling my own zone
Where I'm roaming to
lands far from home
In West Africa's dome,
mood is composite clone
of Islamic and Rasta tone
atmosphere I'm seeing
housese made of stone
straw, mud, galvanized sheeting
leaving West up the river
in a conoe
to visit Mungo Park
The place where great
European explorer's trail starts...
First to encounter the Niger
and chart it's lovely course
But then ofcourse,
in Nigeria he was murdered
with no remorse
Cause he stayed aloof to the people,
so I blend in like chameleon

CHORUS:

I'm Lucid Dreaming
Into a Waking Life
Inducin a Nightmare
When I go sleep at night
Hypnotize myself
As I scream for help
Take control of my dream
becoming something else
I'm Lucid Dreaming
Into a Waking Life
Inducin a Nightmare
When I go sleep at night
Hypnotize myself
As I scream for help
Take control of my dream
becoming something else

VERSE 2:


CHORUS 3:

I'm Lucid Dreaming
Into a Waking Life
Inducin a Nightmare
When I go sleep at night
Hypnotize myself
As I scream for help
Take control of my dream
becoming something else
I'm Lucid Dreaming
Into a Waking Life
Inducin a Nightmare
When I go sleep at night
Hypnotize myself
As I scream for help
Take control of my dream
becoming something else




Reality makes me sad see,
it's because I'm perfectionist,
so I don't want to see this
or I don't want to see that,
So I forced my mind to
face it anyway cause it's fact,
but then I feel way weak
to know the real
of mistakes I made so steep
wieght of mountains on
my shoulders,
of giult that gathers
as I grow older
Now I'm searchin
for some inspiration
So deep into my
past I'm penetrating
and the same past
that pissed me
is the same past
that lifts me
cause the things
I've seen and
learn get to me
spirit grows like a tree
the root is so deep
that I can't see
maybe someday I'll see
« Last Edit: June 15, 2009, 12:02:33 PM by Exit Infinite.. Enter Grammar »
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Evolutionary....
« Reply #1 on: June 13, 2009, 04:11:33 AM »
"Evolutionary"

Life is intricate,
like Arabic script,
evolutionary shit,
survival of fit,
but don't trip,
or get it confused
cause some won't lose
they actually get used...
but not exploited
see, it's all Allah's choice
All in different points
All in different positions
All in levels of wisdom
begginer, intermediate
till you start to see the shit
till you can speak the shit
till you don't need a script
Till you speak off top
of head with it
Like a fuckin freestyle
but in the meanwhile
we profile...
and we front...
but we know what's up
Looking deep into
the Infinite
asked some questions
how is love unrequited?
how is love un-returned
how he loved a rose
but didn't know it's beauty
Or rather he did..
but he didn't understand
what made the rose grow
from within..
he projected himself
onto it's stem
but what he loved
was really just within
himself, or in
the atmospheric haze
till heavy winds swept in
with force of siesmic waves
Left his head in a daze
He wanted to destroy
the evil so it wouldn't live on
and spread to next generation
so all that money wastin...
all that years of frustration
all that time in contemplation
but some startin with even
less, living with more stress
everything in it's position
everything in it's time prescribed
we live individually...
but to move forward evolutionary
it comes much more swiftly
when you help me...
and we do this together
but still I move on whether...
or not you come with me
it's Evolutionary
« Last Edit: June 15, 2009, 11:54:36 AM by Exit Infinite.. Enter Grammar »
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Re: Evolutionary....
« Reply #2 on: June 13, 2009, 01:38:50 PM »
Life is intricate,
like Arabic script,
evolutionary shit,
survival of fit,
but don't trip,
or get it confused
cause some won't lose
they actually get used...
but not exploited
see, it's all Allah's choice
All in different points
All in different positions
All in levels of wisdom
begginer, intermediate
till you start to see the shit
till you can speak the shit
till you don't need a script
Till you speak off top
of head with it
Like a fuckin freestyle
but in the meanwhile
we profile...
and we front...
but we know what's up
Looking deep into
the Infinite
asked some questions
how is love unrequited?
how is love un-returned
how he loved a rose
but didn't know it's beauty
Or rather he did..
but he didn't understand
what made the rose grow
from within..
he projected himself
onto it's stem
but what he loved
was really just within
himself, or in
the atmospheric haze
till heavy winds swept in
with force of siesmic waves
Left his head in a daze
He wanted to destroy
the evil so it wouldn't live on
and spread to next generation
so all that money wastin...
all that years of frustration
all that time in contemplation
but some startin with even
less, living with more stress
everything in it's position
everything in it's time prescribed
we live individually...
but to move forward evolutionary
it comes much more swiftly
when you help me...
and we do this together
but still I move on whether...
or not you come with me
it's Evolutionary

Damn, that was a really ill concept. I never checked the KeyStyles much here, but that's easily the best verse I've ever seen here.
« Last Edit: June 15, 2009, 11:49:10 AM by Exit Infinite.. Enter Grammar »
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Re: Evolutionary....
« Reply #3 on: June 14, 2009, 10:38:45 AM »
doin it right man...
you're doin it right hommie
 

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Re: Evolutionary....
« Reply #4 on: June 15, 2009, 10:22:32 AM »
Life is intricate,
like Arabic script,
evolutionary shit,
survival of fit,
but don't trip,
or get it confused
cause some won't lose
they actually get used...
but not exploited
see, it's all Allah's choice
All in different points
All in different positions
All in levels of wisdom
begginer, intermediate
till you start to see the shit
till you can speak the shit
till you don't need a script
Till you speak off top
of head with it
Like a fuckin freestyle
but in the meanwhile
we profile...
and we front...
but we know what's up
Looking deep into
the Infinite
asked some questions
how is love unrequited?
how is love un-returned
how he loved a rose
but didn't know it's beauty
Or rather he did..
but he didn't understand
what made the rose grow
from within..
he projected himself
onto it's stem
but what he loved
was really just within
himself, or in
the atmospheric haze
till heavy winds swept in
with force of siesmic waves
Left his head in a daze
He wanted to destroy
the evil so it wouldn't live on
and spread to next generation
so all that money wastin...
all that years of frustration
all that time in contemplation
but some startin with even
less, living with more stress
everything in it's position
everything in it's time prescribed
we live individually...
but to move forward evolutionary
it comes much more swiftly
when you help me...
and we do this together
but still I move on whether...
or not you come with me
it's Evolutionary

Damn, that was a really ill concept. I never checked the KeyStyles much here, but that's easily the best verse I've ever seen here.

when I wrote that part, it seemed like something that would make sense to me but not to somebody else because it was so personal.  So that's really dope that someone else liked it
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Re: New Track I'm Working On Writing... "Lucid Dreaming"
« Reply #5 on: June 15, 2009, 11:20:43 AM »
Reality makes me sad see,
it's because I'm perfectionist,
so I don't want to see this
or I don't want to see that,
So I forced my mind to
face it anyway cause it's fact,
but then I feel way weak
to know the real
of mistakes I made so steep
wieght of mountains on
my shoulders,
of giult that gathers
as I grow older
Now I'm searchin
for some inspiration
So deep into my
past I'm penetrating
and the same past
that pissed me
is the same past
that lifts me
cause the things
I've seen and
learn get to me
spirit grows like a tree
the root is so deep
that I can't see
maybe someday I'll see
That's a nice verse.

Ill hook by the way.
 

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Re: New Track I'm Working On Writing... "Lucid Dreaming"
« Reply #6 on: June 15, 2009, 11:29:11 AM »
Reality makes me sad see,
it's because I'm perfectionist,
so I don't want to see this
or I don't want to see that,
So I forced my mind to
face it anyway cause it's fact,
but then I feel way weak
to know the real
of mistakes I made so steep
wieght of mountains on
my shoulders,
of giult that gathers
as I grow older
Now I'm searchin
for some inspiration
So deep into my
past I'm penetrating
and the same past
that pissed me
is the same past
that lifts me
cause the things
I've seen and
learn get to me
spirit grows like a tree
the root is so deep
that I can't see
maybe someday I'll see
That's a nice verse.

Ill hook by the way.

Okay then.. it's ready homie if you'll do the hook for me

I'll upload the version of the song as I have it now... and then the beat by itself, and then you can apply the hook and send it to me
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« Last Edit: June 15, 2009, 11:48:18 AM by Exit Infinite.. Enter Grammar »
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Re: "Evolutionary"/ New Track I'm Working On Writing... "Lucid Dreaming"
« Reply #8 on: June 15, 2009, 11:55:19 AM »
So I've written a few verses up there, now I have to re-structure the rhyme scheme and consolidate it all to just 2 or 3 verses
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Re: "Evolutionary"/ New Track I'm Working On Writing... "Lucid Dreaming"
« Reply #9 on: June 15, 2009, 12:12:13 PM »
Have you been practicing lucid dreaming? Cool huh?
 

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Re: "Evolutionary"/ New Track I'm Working On Writing... "Lucid Dreaming"
« Reply #10 on: June 15, 2009, 12:49:38 PM »
Have you been practicing lucid dreaming? Cool huh?

Yeah, I had some inspiration from the movie "Waking Life"
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Re: "Evolutionary"/ New Track I'm Working On Writing... "Lucid Dreaming"
« Reply #11 on: June 15, 2009, 05:47:44 PM »
ITS HOMMIE INFINITE DOIN IT R3@L