Murrow, for once, give constructive criticism...

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

You say I am terrible at rapping and I should quit...Well, maybe for once u can give some constructive criticism...Here's a song with AlerG (your favorite Net Rapper) and me (Sccit) called "Nice Try"...Definetly not some of my best shit, but it's one of my most recent verses...


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AlerG does the first 2 verses, and I do the last...My part was written and spitten in 15 minutes maximun...


Now please, FOR ONCE, give some honest, constructive feedback...PeACe

[JAE]

In all truth I acctully liked this. Really Dope beat. I really like this beat. As Ive heard before Alerg is a pretty tight rapper. Now_I_Know I think you can rhyme I just dont like your voice. Nothing personal Im just telling you how I feel. Other than that you're pretty good.

There. I focused on the good parts of the song. I dont think I was dissin either of you at all. Of course theres flaws in the track but Im trying to avoid talkin about them.
That is my honest opinion.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Of course theres flaws in the track but Im trying to avoid talkin about them.

But my point is, I DO want a full review...I want you to tell me what u like about it AND what u don't like about it, so that I can improve on what I need to improve on...Thanks for the review though...PeAce...

[Murrow]

I've given your constructive critizism.  I'm through with that cause it is not worth it.  Mostly though, the way your voice is is what fucks up a lot of songs.

[Don Seer]

how many times sccit say fuck?  

[JAE]

Mostly though, the way your voice is is what fucks up a lot of songs.

Thats what I thought. Also, do you guys fuck as many women as you claim in this song?

Thats whats bad about it. The topic is played out and well...Now_I_Know you just have a voice that I dont like. Try rapping really high pitched on somthin.

[Westcoastfanatic]

Only thing that's dope about it is the beat. Leave the dirty
rhymes for Too $hort.

[Murrow]

Your saying I'm obsessed WITH YOU?  Look at the posts you are making about me!?  Your just so dam funny we can't help it.  Don't act like your getting singled out, cause you have been an asshole to just about everyone eversince you got hear.  So what goes around, comes around dick munch.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Rock fan...Why do u reply twice in the same thread, when I haven't even replied to your first reply? More proof of Murrows obsession...PeACe

[Murrow]

Rock fan...I'm sorry I try and be cool, and rapper and many others things I can't.  Please forgive me so that you'll leave me alone.  I know I need to grow up, but I wanna be a crip who writes fake quotes about himself, by himself.

NIK, it's okay man...really...this is going too far.

[OG Hack Wilson]

lol @ skittles

[Sikotic™]

Hahahaha. Murrow is obsessed with Elior, but Elior is making threads begging for constructive criticism. Grow up, man.

BTW, how does it make you feel now that AlerG has a group that tours and does well while your ass still hasn't attempted to make it on your own at anything including rapping?

[Your favorite posters favorite poster]

It's sad but he hasn't grow up at all.

[OG Hack Wilson]

It's sad but he hasn't grow up at all.

hahahaha it's so fucking true!!!!

[Sccit]

Hahahaha. Murrow is obsessed with Elior, but Elior is making threads begging for constructive criticism. Grow up, man.

BTW, how does it make you feel now that AlerG has a group that tours and does well while your ass still hasn't attempted to make it on your own at anything including rapping?

major props to him, i don't hate, i congratulate.....i actually just started recording again after a 5+ year hiatus....not really expectin much, but the shit i have recorded is soundin pretty good.