Author Topic: HERES A LIL KEY STYLE YALL PEEP IT AND TELL ME WHAT U THINK  (Read 205 times)

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HERES A LIL KEY STYLE YALL PEEP IT AND TELL ME WHAT U THINK
« on: November 07, 2002, 10:19:07 PM »
(sorry there may be sum spelling errors but who givs a fuck)




IM A RYHME ADDICT/BUT EVERY TIME YALL RHYME/IT DEFINES TRAGIC/TRAGIC LIKE TRAFFIC ACCEDENTS,YALL SPITTIN WHACK SHIT LIKE NASTY FLATUENCE/ITS UNDAGROUND TAKTICCS/INFESTIN THE PLANETS INHABITENTS/CREATEIN ADDICTS WIT BAD HABITS /LIKE SAVAGES/RAVAGEIN AMONG THE POPULATION/CAUSIN CONFLITIONS WITHIN THE NATION/IM NEVER PAUSEIN IN SITUATIONS/CUZ I GOTS NO PAYTSHENCE(error)/NO HESITATIONS/I HATE WAITIN AND CONTEMPLATEIN/ON WHOS FAKE/AND WHOS HATIN/IM DEMOSTRATEIN/THE WAY I SPIT FLAMES/AIMED AT YALL GAY TIL YALL DECAY/EITHER WAY TODAY OR TOMMOROW/THE AK I WILL BORROW/LET IT SPRAY LEAVE YO FAM---ILY IN SORROW/BUT CANT WE /JUS GET ALONG/MAN/HIT DA BONG/AN SIP SUM TALL CANS/ID RATHER DO DAT THEN LAY YER CREW FLAT/FROM DA AUTOMACK/AND UNLOAD AH CLIP IN YO BACK/TAKE IT HOW U WANT/U WANNA HIT DA BLUNT/OR GET LIT FROM DA PUMP/I DONT STUNT PUNK/I NEVER FRONT/
Gold diggaz get pennies plenty hoes don't get any
if she's a strippa I'm gon tip her with a counterfeit 20
Goin to get the new J's if foot locker ain't got em
I'm gon grab the store clerk and drop him in the rock bottom
Shh... I'm bout to sneak up on Bin Laden
Ask him where he been hidin, then slap the snot out him
Pay top tolla for hungry rot weiler
Make you eat his dog food and see how quick you can run patna
 

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Re:HERES A LIL KEY STYLE YALL PEEP IT AND TELL ME WHAT U THINK
« Reply #1 on: November 07, 2002, 11:03:39 PM »
that was pretty decent for a begginer yo, keep it up u ll get better
 

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Re:HERES A LIL KEY STYLE YALL PEEP IT AND TELL ME WHAT U THINK
« Reply #2 on: November 08, 2002, 01:57:45 PM »
Not bad.. I liked thr rhyme scheme and the flow wasnt too bad.. Try not 2 type up your shit in caps.. does get a bit annoyin..
 

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Re:HERES A LIL KEY STYLE YALL PEEP IT AND TELL ME WHAT U THINK
« Reply #3 on: November 08, 2002, 05:07:24 PM »
Not bad.. I liked thr rhyme scheme and the flow wasnt too bad.. Try not 2 type up your shit in caps.. does get a bit annoyin..