Author Topic: is it hard (Read 460 times)

IslamInevitable · « **on:** October 09, 2009, 01:06:58 AM »

is it hard visualize wit ya virtual eyes the virtue in guise when i terrorize
fear in ya eyes is obvious its time to die/
but ya hesistently resistant to enterin ya next existence/
here's another reminder in case you missed it/
nuclear war is imminently depicted to be the end of your progeny/
goliath committin sodomy/ no truth and honesty/
this is food for ya thought b honestly/
its a travesty, wonderin where the seeds of malcolm bee/
my man shabbazz, died no suprise, brothers its time to uprise/
upsize the revolution, but the slogan got customized enough times/
throw dust over ya eyes/
lift ya veil and observe this vicious tale from your citadel/
as i set sail accross the cosmic ocean/
stars movin in and outta focus, comets causin commotion/
my retina gets a glimpse of a nebula, helium, hydrogen and formation of sulfur/
magnanimous images of astonishin times/
while we live in squalor and crime and claim a marvelous mind, its hard to define/
so i write a rhyme to right the wrong/
so feel that which i shed light upon!

bang... till ya catch it in the head

nigga im in a somalian pirate bay gettin high every day!
one luv to my brothers... feelin this one...

G-Funk · « **Reply #1 on:** October 09, 2009, 01:24:57 AM »

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^{nuclear war is imminently depicted to be the end of your progeny/
goliath committin sodomy/ no truth and honesty/
this is food for ya thought b honestly/
its a travesty, wonderin where the seeds of malcolm bee/}

this one was definitely better! ^ these lines are my personal favorite. Good flow there.

IslamInevitable · « **Reply #2 on:** October 09, 2009, 01:47:50 PM »

QuietTruth · « **Reply #3 on:** October 09, 2009, 03:52:53 PM »

Crazy ill. Propz man. You really doin' somethang man!

IslamInevitable · « **Reply #4 on:** October 09, 2009, 04:22:55 PM »

good lookin... appreciate it... gotta lotta work to do on the flow though as always...

QuietTruth · « **Reply #5 on:** October 09, 2009, 04:24:18 PM »

Yeah, regardless though, you got writing skills.

Þŕiņçë · « **Reply #6 on:** October 09, 2009, 05:23:12 PM »

best practice is prolly rapping along with whatever u listen to. also when your writing to a beat rap it out loud to make sure you got enuff breath an shit to do it. my main problem back in the day was i would always write my raps so fuckin fast that i couldnt even spit em